User talk:ScroogeCNL/sandbox

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Make sure you convert your outline into the full article.Profarch (talk) 18:16, 16 March 2018 (UTC)

You have a lot of bullet points that should be put into paragraph form and your paragraph is lacking the information from the bullet points. All of your html links and article links should be added as electronic citations. Also you can probably find more specific information on the tools. My site was Sanganakallu, so I know there is more information about the tools. KaKuAkaSu47 (talk) 23:45, 21 March 2018 (UTC)