User talk:Sdadams2/Phillip Harold Lewis

This is a good entry, but has a few style issues. The content regarding his graduate education should be expanded. It would also be good to have links to information about his principal colleagues. Did he ever supervise any notable students? Can you say more about his specific museum contributions, especially with regard to the issue of "primitive" art? (For example, what was his position on this?) Can you put his career within a more complete context within the history of anthropology? Please see the corrections and comments that I've made, including the addition of relevant hyperlinks. Hoopes (talk) 23:29, 28 October 2012 (UTC)