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Steven Davis Georgia Institute of Technology undergrad student

Response to critique of endoscopic endonasal surgery
Hey Steven,

I just wanted to respond to a few of your comments on my article. I requested permission from about 15 different organizations to use their pictures so I could explain the procedure better. I have either gotten a "no" or no response at all. Also I don't think that having a picture is a requirement for the articles, but I did add a picture to better help the anatomy. Also, if you have time before 7 tonight, can you tell me an example of where you think I should trim down sentences? I have been editing I just want to make sure I got them all/addressed your concern.

Thank you and all of your comments and critiques are welcomed and appreciated,

Jlukeedwards (talk) 22:12, 27 November 2013 (UTC)