User talk:Sddone01/sandbox

Welcome to my talk page. As you can see my user page is very random and doesn't have any actual information on it. Right now I'm practicing using different editing tools both with the VisualEditor and wikicode. Hopefully sometime soon I'll have something worthwhile to read and watch. Thanks! ♥ --Sddone01 (talk) 17:44, 1 September 2016 (UTC)

feedback on article contribution
Comments are not in any particular order:
 * So you've developed a profile of a recent inclusion story - Orange is the New Black. I thought, however, your goal included more than instances of inclusion. Perhaps I am misremembering, but I thought you wanted to create a framework that set out a way of thinking about inclusion - some why in addition to some where? Why inclusion matters seems to be the focus of your sources. Correct me if I'm wrong.
 * If inclusion narratives are your goal, this is a solid beginning.
 * There are several small editing/proofing items to be attended to, such as - a women - engaged to male fiance, etc.
 * Expansion and refinement, if it does not include some framework, certainly would require some use of sources other than the shows themselves. Any thoughts on how that might develop?Jagrif02 (talk) 21:46, 18 October 2016 (UTC)