User talk:Sdel002/Maba Man

Hi. A few suggestions to break up the content into separate paragraphs and cite the source/reference.

The first paragraph gives information about the cranial Second paragraph you gave good information about the discovery Third has information about the culture (cite each paragraphs)

I think if the information was broken up in these suggested paragraphs, the three required references could be added to the end of each paragraph.

Peer Review
You did a good job of further describing the Maba Man discovery and its cultural influence. However, the absence of sources hurts your article. It makes your writing unreliable since readers are unaware of where such knowledge came from. I think that adding the citations will definitely improve your article and also help you in further elaborating on what you have already written! I think that dividing your writing into sections would also be significantly beneficial. Good start! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jacobshanks10 (talk • contribs) 03:54, 16 May 2020 (UTC)

Your draft on Maba Man could be better if you divided your content into different headings or subheadings as well as adding three reliable sources to make sure your information is valid. Images or charts can also help contribute to your article if you are having a difficult time finding facts about Maba Man through articles or journals. Good job in explaining cultural aspects of Maba Man. Cgarc070 (talk) 06:32, 16 May 2020 (UTC)