User talk:Sdenviogeo/Facultative anaerobic organism

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Lead Section: There is no lead section present in the sandbox, but the lead section in the Wikipedia page is straightforward and easy to comprehend without previous knowledge of the topic.

Structure: The "Lead" and "Article Body" sections are well organized and easy to follow. Could expand by including other sections. Suggestions including: Various functions of faculative anaeriobic organisms, possible examples (as given in the original Wikipedia page) and how they can affect other plant and animal life. Also by explaining further what id depicted in the first image on the actual Wikipedia page.

Coverage and Completeness: This topic has not been well covered or completed on the sandbox or wikipedia page. This can be done by completing the suggested topics given in "Structure" section.

Neutrality: The sentences given in article body have an overall neutral tone. Only suggestion would be to take out the word "particularly" as an adverb for the importance of their survival without oxygen as it can suggest a certain level of bias.

Scientific Accuracy: The information given is all cited accurately and backed up by peer reviewed sources.

Sources: All the links are active and go straight to reliable and peer reviewed sources.

Figures: No figures were included in the sandbox, but the images already present on Wikipedia can be kept and help to supplement the information already present. The first image that shows facultative anaerobes can be identified could be expanded on in text section.

128.61.121.139 (talk) 16:37, 29 March 2023 (UTC)