User talk:Sdunc2/sandbox

Peer Review
These edits would absolutely benefit this wikipedia page. I do not believe that this article or your edits are biased. Your citations are proper and they work when I clicked on them. However, I would recommend adding at least one credible source such as a scholarly journal. Sbeau7 (talk) 16:49, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review Response
Thank you for the advice I'll definitely look into finding a scholarly journal. This topic isn't the most widely covered topic so it'll be a challenge but I know it will benefit the page if I am able to locate one. I will try to find more articles that aren't biased as well to be able to create a better references for the page. Sdunc2 (talk) 16:56, 1 May 2018 (UTC)