User talk:Sealy1999/sandbox

Headers organize the article very well. - Citations are all in order. - The random information that you do not know what to do with, could go in the personal paragraph but you can cut out some of the not irrelevant information.

The first paragraph in early life is really confusing with all of the names. Maybe try to merge more of the sentences together to make it more structured with her birth parents and her adoptive parents. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 18bethanyh (talk • contribs) 14:06, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

The section on the sexual assault could be hyperlinked to another page so you can reference it but do not need an entire section. The Junior and Senior subtitles are slightly confusing. The first sentences of the Gymnastics career section could be added under the subtitle early life. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lordakowski (talk • contribs) 14:11, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

This section is a bit awkward and could be re-worded: "Simone Biles spent all her secondary education as a homeschooler and graduated in the summer of 2015. Since she was a junior elite gymnast, many colleges were interested in her competing for their team, and the list included Alabama, UCLA, and Ohio State." — Preceding unsigned comment added by Crbrenner (talk • contribs) 14:15, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

should be U.S not us — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mollyemm0307 (talk • contribs) 14:16, 28 November 2018 (UTC)