User talk:Sean.holbrook

Jesse Rose (June 18)
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Chris Troutman ( talk ) 18:07, 18 June 2014 (UTC)
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Concerns on neutrality and verifiability
Please read my reply at the help desk. There are two sources I processed for you in the “Career” section, but I couldn't write first paragraph. It gives a generic description in a form readable to an average reader, and then represents the connection of the subject to the outside world in a nutshell. It should probably say "a British DJer and then producer who also worked in Germany. awarded X and Y." in a written style. I found hard times trying to describe these activities in a nutshell, as I only today learned about them.

Please edit as you find suitable. It takes a great deal of being familiar with the topic. (Editing the article has expanded my knowledge and vocabulary.)

--Gryllida (talk) 10:10, 30 June 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please read the comments left by the reviewer on your submission. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved. . Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia!
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Hi, I added some changes and I am wondering if it is good enough to resubmit it. Sean.holbrook (talk) 16:48, 8 July 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Draft:Jesse Rose (August 16)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Sionk (talk) 16:48, 16 August 2014 (UTC)

Draft:Jesse Rose concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Jesse Rose, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:31, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Jesse Rose


Hello, Sean.holbrook. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Jesse Rose".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. HasteurBot (talk) 04:01, 30 March 2015 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Jesse Rose


Hello, Sean.holbrook. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Jesse Rose".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the  or  code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. 1989 15:56, 22 May 2017 (UTC)