User talk:Sean Faron/sandbox

Really good so far i like how you are editing German unification. Think about looking at the legacy section it seems to skip over some of the lasting effects of colonization and maybe Germanys response to their past actions. It may be a stretch but you should think about German colonization during World War 2. They wanted to retake most of Africa and also colonize all of Eastern europe.Harrison11 (talk) 16:50, 9 March 2019 (UTC)

There are many information about German unification and all of them are good information to add in wikipedia page. However, paragraph 2 is the same as the original text. And I wonder in which part paragraphs 3, 4, and 5 are added.Moreover, I think Medicine and Science part needs more information comparing to other parts. Miyu Morishita — Preceding unsigned comment added by Miyu Morishita (talk • contribs) 14:12, 16 March 2019 (UTC)