User talk:Seandemps/New sandbox

tuj54739 1. Your addition about leftovers was intensive and clear. That is your best draft. I like how you included that the larger sizes of portions can increase weight gain, obesity. The intro for the Christmas page was well done. The holiday was explained clearly and was a good indicator of what the article was about. 2. I am not seeing anything that would make your work off topic. 3. I am not seeing any biases in the articles. Maybe the word "joyful" is an opinion word. 4. For your drafts you are using one source. Maybe you can use more to find more info to add to your work. Your sources look reliable. 5. I wouldn't make any changes, maybe just look at a few more sources. Honestly, everything looks fine and would flow well into the original work. 6. I do not see any similarities between our article. Mine was more scientific while yours was more informative about specific topics. Tuj54739 (talk) 00:24, 29 October 2019 (UTC)