User talk:Seastandbymeblackeye/Daisy Jones & The Six (book)/Cirith Ninniach Peer Review

Peer Review
Lead: this looks good; very concise.

Content: the plot summary is good so far but needs to be finished.

Tone and Balance: the tone is neutral and does not try to convince the reader of a particular viewpoint.

Sources and References: formatted nicely, and there are plenty of reliable sources.

Organization: the organization makes sense; there isn't anything I would change.

Overall, this is an informative and organized article. My main suggestion is to check the grammar and wording in the plot summary section, since there are places where the wording is confusing. The plot summary seems to be unfinished, but other than that there are no major issues. Great job! Cirith Ninniach (talk) 18:48, 11 May 2023 (UTC)