User talk:Seeley32/Pinky (dolphin)/Linyaf Peer Review

Peer review from Linya Feng
Hi!

I like your topic! Pinky dolphin is so beautiful and rare. You talked about the history of it, which is good. Please remember to get more detailed about the history. I suggest you could add some photos of this cute animal that help readers know what you describe. I think you could make the structure looks more clear a little bit. Please remember to add the topic, which is under the heading. Add a reference section to your draft might be also helpful for you. You could add more details about the pinky dolphins.

This is what you posted: Bibliography for Pinky (dolphin)Changed to "Reference“ --Select the headling and then type it in. -https://www.nationalgeographic.com/news/2015/09/150909-pinky-albino-bottlenose-dolphin-animals-science/ -https://abcnews.go.com/US/pinkie-rare-pink-dolphin-spotted-louisiana-waters-confirmed/story?id=33625545 - https://www.gtgoodtimes.com/2019/05/06/a-rare-pink-dolphin-named-pinky-is-now-a-mother-of-an-adorable-pink-calf/

Added a new section before this: (You can use Facts as the topic or History or so on) "In 2017, a video was taken showing two albino dolphins swimming in the lake, presumed to be Pinky and her cal"

Added more detail, please. Linyaf (talk) 00:54, 20 October 2020 (UTC)