User talk:SeenaBerkeley/sandbox

Peer Review
One thing you did particularly well was the tone of your article. It is encyclopedic and does not include opinions which is perfect for a Wikipedia article. I would add some more hyperlinks within your writing so that readers can travel to related pages and learn more. For example, when you are listing the names of senators/candidates that Swing Left contributed to hyperlink the Wikipedia articles to their names so readers can easily learn more about these people. If you could I would also add some more information in some of the sections. For example, the Political Action section could benefit from more concrete examples of Swing Left contributing to campaigns. Cfeldmar (talk) 17:20, 17 October 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review YK
I think you have a really good start to your article. I like each section and the amount of information you wrote is pretty substantial for a first draft. Like the review above, I think you should add some hyperlinks because when I was reading it as well, I was unfamiliar with a lot of terms/people. Also im sure you know, but you likely need more information in each subsection. I like the information and format-- all you need to do is continue working on it. Good work — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lavarball13 (talk • contribs) 04:23, 18 October 2022 (UTC)