User talk:Seesaw151

Your submission at Articles for creation: Li Sancai (March 16)
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Onel5969 (talk) 17:02, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

Hi, I just looked at your article Draft:Li Sancai, and it seemed fine in tone to me, except for maybe the first sentence (which I've adjusted). I corrected some of the formatting, but overall I thought the article was reasonably sourced and presented fairly, so I have resubmitted it for review. I think it will be accepted and published soon. I hope you will be not be discouraged but rather inspired to continue editing Wikipedia and adding articles like this! Rigadoun (talk) 04:46, 22 March 2015 (UTC)