User talk:Sefinkel/Caste politics

Peer Review
I think the article is in good standing. You do a great job organizing each section so the reader has a comprehensive understanding of Dalit women’s social, economic, health standing. I also like that you plan to add a section on education because I think that will help provide a more holistic image of Dalit women. I think the article would benefit from more links to other Wikipedia page (for example, linking to the Intersectionality page and the Sex work page). My biggest caution would be refraining from inserting your own thoughts about sex work. In the second paragraph under “Economic Standing” you refer to sex work as “jobs” in scare quotes, which is not neutral. I know that right beforehand you write that sex work is seen negatively, but writing in square quotes implies that those negative thoughts are universal. Could you also add what Dalit women think about sex work? Additionally, I think some of the sentences could be restructured in order to avoid passive voice, and others could be shortened or broken up so the reader has an easier time absorbing the information. After you add information to the “Educational Standing” section, I think your article will be in great shape! This is a great addition to the “Caste politics” Wikipedia page because you bring up an important, intersectional conversation.

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