User talk:Sefinkel/Caste politics/Kamara03 Peer Review

Overall the article was really interesting and easy to understand.The article gave me a good insight into the topic and gave me a foundation to build on. I think the article wasn’t too biased although it did focus mainly on the negatives associated with caste politics (Although I'm not sure how you could give a broad look because I don't know any positives), it did relay the actual situation. I think the article did a great job explaining the connection between the caste system and its impact on politics. I do think some sources should be replaced with peer reviewed articles as well as backing some claims with sources. I do think the article is well developed and just needs a few more sections to give a more broad view into caste politics. I think the article itself is there, it just needs a few more additions. The article could also use more images and maybe more citations to other wiki articles to give context. The article could use some rewording and grammar checks because at some points I had to reread to understand the train of thought. Lastly, this article had great flow and provided enough information to gain an adequate understanding of the topic.Kamara03 (talk) 02:35, 3 April 2023 (UTC)