User talk:SegarraRiudebitlles

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Your submission at Articles for creation
 Josep Maria Bonet, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!  DGG ( talk ) 05:31, 30 July 2013 (UTC)  DGG ( talk ) 03:40, 30 July 2013 (UTC)
 * although I accepted it, it needs further work. The most important remaining problem is that the English stule is not idiomatic. I improved some parts of it as best I could, but I do not actually read Catalan, and I am not sure I accurately rendered everything. Another round is needed--I will look at it again if I have a chance. 
 * ''I also adjusted the references to fit our usual format. additional references would help.
 * the next step is to make proper links to  english WP  articles on the various churches. You need to go back to the Catalan article, find the article on the church, and see if we have an English equivalent, and make the link to it. If we do not, make the link anyone, and perhaps someone will follow up further. At least, make links to all the cities and towns mentioned. Similar for the other artists, if they have articles in the Catalan--give their full names, and make a link for future expansion.
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