User talk:Segatari

Your submission at Articles for creation: Electronic Theatre Controls (November 10)
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WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 20:31, 10 November 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Electronic Theatre Controls (November 10)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by WikiOriginal-9 was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


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WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 20:59, 10 November 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Electronic Theatre Controls (November 10)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Vanderwaalforces was:

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Vanderwaalforces (talk) 22:20, 10 November 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Electronic Theatre Controls (November 11)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Stuartyeates was:

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Stuartyeates (talk) 03:20, 11 November 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Electronic Theatre Controls (November 12)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Tagishsimon was:

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Tagishsimon (talk) 00:24, 12 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi! I am in no way shape or form related to ETC and neither am I getting any form of payment for this. I'm just trying to translate the existing Wikipedia page for this from German to English.
 * I've verified and while it's true that the website cited in ref 5 will publish just about anything a business asks them to, that article was redacted by the website's staff, I really want to get this Wikipedia page out there, I want to hyperlink it to some other pages I'm planning on creating. Ref 8, Ref 11, Ref 16 and Ref 17 all seem to match the criterias, though once again, I'm a bit of a newbie here so I'm still figuring things out haha
 * Thanks Segatari (talk) 03:38, 12 November 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Electronic Theatre Controls (November 12)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Utopes was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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Utopes (talk / cont) 04:12, 12 November 2023 (UTC)


 * I'm so sorry! I'm still very new to Wikipedia and hadn't read the criterias for "notability", I will try to find news reports that match these criterias. That said, I don't understand why my article is getting denied, I'm just translating the Wikipeda page written in German, why is it accepted in that language but when I translate it isn't.? Segatari (talk) 04:28, 12 November 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Electronic Theatre Controls (November 12)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Vanderwaalforces was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Electronic Theatre Controls and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Vanderwaalforces (talk) 19:09, 12 November 2023 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Electronic Theatre Controls has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Electronic Theatre Controls. Thanks! - Rich T&#124;C&#124;E-Mail 20:25, 12 November 2023 (UTC)


 * hiii!! thank you so much for taking the time to write a thorough answer! i've reached out to the help chat and i'm confident that the revised version will be okay! I've included a product review (along with other references that I don't think will suffice for notability) and it meets all criteria needed for a product review to be eligible for notability, Thank you! Segatari (talk) 03:34, 13 November 2023 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Electronic Theatre Controls has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Electronic Theatre Controls. Thanks! lizthegrey (talk) 16:43, 13 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi! Thanks! I'm not too sure I understand WP:ORGIND . Is the website I've linked okay? From my understanding, it seems to say that referencing trade magazines is okay, as long as it's independent. Ref. 21 does appear to be independent, and the publisher also has a Wikipedia page. Do I need to take any more action for it to be approved? Thanks! Segatari (talk) 00:22, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Wisconsin State Journal looks to be solid independent, reliable coverage. I'm just leery of using Lighting and Sound International reviews of a singular product to show notability of the company (e.g. just because a pub has an article doesn't mean it's accepted as reliable, see WP:RSN and WP:RSP - for instance CoinDesk exists because secondary sourcing exists about it, but per WP:COINDESK it's not considered reliable as a source itself). Likewise, I fear LEDs Magazine and TheatreCrafts are probably trade. the WISC piece is good, so that definitely is a second ORGCRIT hit far as I'm concerned. It's close to the line! Close enough I didn't feel comfortable signing off on it as a newer AfC reviewer but I'm sure someone will come through in the next week or so and give you a thumbs up or down. Some advice to you: less is more; trim back the timeline of acquisitions/heavy reliance on primary sourcing and focus just on what you can write based on the WI state journal and WISC articles. You can continue editing/improving even while waiting for review so I suggest you do that. lizthegrey (talk) 03:25, 14 November 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Electronic Theatre Controls (November 14)
 Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/New_question&withJS=MediaWiki:AFCHD-wizard.js&page=Draft:Electronic_Theatre_Controls Articles for creation help desk] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by Lightoil was: This topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia.

Lightoil (talk) 19:12, 14 November 2023 (UTC)

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 14:07, 23 April 2024 (UTC)