User talk:Segott/Francisco Arratia

You seem to have already gathered a lot of good information! That's great! However, I would make sure to balance out your sections. Keep up on all of them, so you don't fall behind in one. I noticed a couple of the sections were shorter than the rest. I would also go through and remove some of your unnecessary links, such as the word "kidnapped." It seems a bit excessive to me, not to mention distracting. However, great work so far! You've made a lot of progress! 74.143.53.74 (talk) 00:49, 25 October 2012 (UTC)