User talk:Seligmanns/sandbox

I like how you show the quote and show how you are going to reword it. I would consider adding more Kylagauthier (talk) 15:03, 26 April 2018 (UTC)

I really like the organization flow of this paper. It is neatly put together with examples and brief notes. It shows good steps on what will be added and what will be changed. Overall, good start to editing your article. Kkarolina99 (talk) 15:22, 26 April 2018 (UTC)