User talk:SelimLakhdar/sandbox

Résumé Introductif

 * "while reaming" : "while remaining"
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "relies on the fact " : un peu lourd, non?
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * " if a bot succeeded" : toujours au présent
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "so theoretically if a bot succeeded on the test it could be used for solving AI problems" : "so theoretically," ... reformuler en supprimant le "if"? Tjrs au présent (T.A.P.)
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "access took priority to security" : pas anglais (et TAP)
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)

History and evolution

 * "which consists on trying" : "which consists in trying"
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "growth of Internet users" : growth of the number of users ? How to say ?
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * " between normal human actions, and automated actions through bots" : what is opposed to here? Is "normal" compulsory in the end?


 * "The first attempt led to different attacks to break the system which lights up new ways" : led(past)#lights up(present). + light up : rather trigger?
 * Done !

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 * "not a easy" : "not an easy"
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "challenge have to " : has
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * " for human to pass" : humans
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "and hard as" : "as hard"
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "was introduced like, " : "were introduced, like"
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "puzzle based CAPTCHA" : ", the puzzle based CAPTCHA"
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "new HIPs systems" : "new HIP systems"
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "was using" : "is using"?
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "if hackers could break it" : "if hackers could not break it"?
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "1024 integer " : "1024 integers"
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)

Usage and utility

 * "HIPs systems" : "HIP systems", rather?
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "Generally they are" : "They are generally"
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * is HIPs acronym usable? Not seen in the Internet
 * Yes, i reused it from somes articles.

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "control the access" : rather "control access"
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "this scheme works also to detect" : to detect what?
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "usage" : usages
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "crawler." : "crawlers."
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "Interactions of social networks: tracking online bots." : maybe reversing the order "tracking online bots (in the interactions of social networks)" to keep listing gerundive forms (-ing) beginning the list?
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "Specifically, in the TLS protocol to counter the MITM attack." : lacks the reminder of what is specifically, reformulation needed.
 * There are wiki links.

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)

Usability/accessibility

 * "trade off" : trade-off
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:10, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "between the accessibility and the strength" : "between accessibility and strength"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:10, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "The HIP have to" : "The HIP has to"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:10, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "They state" : who ? (authors presumably) --> to "anonymize"
 * Done, suppress they state
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:10, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "or a success rate" : "or have success rate"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:10, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "rate of .01%" : is it a correct way of displaying a rate? I couldn't find any like this in the Internet
 * Yes, it's 0.1%
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:10, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "human recognition filed" : " human recognition field"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:10, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "analysis and understand" : "analyses and understands"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:10, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "it don't" : "it doesn't"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:10, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "leaded" : "led"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:10, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "is the greatest security related" : "is the greatest security-related"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:10, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "security related problems" : "security related problem"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:10, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "for user with disabilities" : "for users with disabilities"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:10, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "audio based" : seems "audio-based" is more correct
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:10, 28 January 2019 (UTC)

Security

 * "to defeat computer bots from bypassing" : "to prevent computer bots from bypassing"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:13, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "bot-attacks" : "bot attacks"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:13, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "CAPTCHA is usable" : "CAPTCHA be usable"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:13, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "bot-attacks" : ditto
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:13, 28 January 2019 (UTC)

AI usage

 * "a way to advance in that filed" : [field] "a way to progress in that field"?
 * Yes, you are right.
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:59, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "But in another hand" : usually used after a "in one hand" first sentence
 * Yes, you are right, i just suppress "in another hand".
 * 13:59, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "well oriented" : "well-oriented"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:59, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "This came from the segmentation problem, which relies on breaking the interlacing between words, but this seems to be broken" : difficult to understand (this, which, this). A problem ("segmentation problem") cannot "rely" on something.
 * The distorted text came from the segmentation problem, the challenge for AI is to breaking the interlacing between words, but this seems to be broken.
 * Is it better ?
 * Nowitsover (talk) 13:59, 28 January 2019 (UTC)

Segmentation resistance

 * "we" : third person only
 * I don't find any we is this part
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:04, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "break a text-based CAPTCHA" : rather 'hack' or 'bypass' than 'break', no?
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:04, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "More we combine effects for designing a strong HIP more the HIP is secured" : [the more ... the more] --> "The more effects for designing a strong HIP are combined, the more the HIP is secured"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:04, 28 January 2019 (UTC)

Challenge generation

 * "many instance" : "many instances"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:06, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "an aspect on interest" : "an aspect of interest"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:06, 28 January 2019 (UTC)

Public Sources

 * "Beyond the several rules to design" : "Beyond the preceding rules to design"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:21, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "the more effective" : "the most effective"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:21, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "CAPTCHA systems which relies" : "CAPTCHA systems which rely"
 * "on private database or algorithms" : "on private databases or algorithms"
 * "This risk of an" : lacks a verb : "This" ... (emphases, focuses,) raises the ... "risk of an"
 * "trying to reverse engineering" : improper use : "trying to reverse engineer" or " trying to use/do reverse engineering"
 * "CAPTCHA systems which rely on private databases or algorithms to generate their challenges are prohibited. And this rise a risk of an adversary generating all possible tests and using a hash function to look up the answer in a pre-computed database or he try to do reverse engineering." is this good for you ?
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:21, 28 January 2019 (UTC)

--G7tiiR (talk) 22:24, 21 January 2019 (UTC)

CAPTCHAs

 * "It depends on the gap" : "It relies on the gap"?
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "many other implementation" : "many other implementations"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "Many fields was studied" : "Many fields were studied"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "find body parts" : "body parts finding" to keep the gerundive listing?
 * Yes, its sounds better
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "deciding nudity" : also reverse in "nudity deciding", though it's a quote, no?
 * Yes, it is
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "in different categories;" : announces a list : rather with a ':' in the end, and, better to use lists (*), rather than sections. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 81.199.32.90 (talk) 12:16, 22 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Is it better now ?
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)

Text-Based CAPTCHA

 * "It depends on" : "it relies on"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)

Image-Based CAPTCHA

 * "It depends on" : "it relies on" (and so, modifying the 'relies on' just after)
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "difficulty for computers" : "difficulty for bots"?
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "some aspect" : "some aspects"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)

Non-Visual CAPTCHA

 * "Those CAPTCHAs was" : "Those CAPTCHAs were"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "sonor recognition" : "sound recognition"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)

Semantic CAPTCHA

 * "to attacks using" : "to attack using" is convenient also
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)

Audio CAPTCHA

 * "sonor deformation" : ditto
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)

Others approaches

 * "those different technique" : "those different techniques"

--G7tiiR (talk) 13:08, 22 January 2019 (UTC)

Attacks on HIPs

 * "hackers/researcher" : "hackers/researchers"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:43, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "We can cite" : :-D
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:43, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "project PWNtcha" : "PWNtcha project"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:43, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "" PWNtcha stands for "Pretend We’re Not a Turing Computer but a Human Antagonist", as well as PWN capTCHAs. This project’s goal is to demonstrate the inefficiency of many captcha implementations. " : isn't that quotation too long? (and it's pure quotation :(

OCR

 * "and detect letters" : "and detect letters."
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:43, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "we can" : no, we can't (use 'we')
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:43, 28 January 2019 (UTC)

Machine learning

 * "It consist on" : "It consists in"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:43, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "pure recognition tasks which" : "pure recognition tasks that"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:43, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "machine learning based" : "machine learning-based" ?
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:43, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "text distortion based" : "text distortion-based" ? (even found text-distortion-based : a rule to hyphen words when 'adjectivization' is used?)

Stealing cycles (redirection)

 * "One of possible attack" : "One of possible attacks"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:43, 28 January 2019 (UTC)


 * "on a CAPTCHA system, it's to" : "on a CAPTCHA system is to"
 * Done
 * Nowitsover (talk) 14:43, 28 January 2019 (UTC)

--G7tiiR (talk) 13:48, 22 January 2019 (UTC)

Résumé Introductif

 * "Designing an accessible HIP is a new major concern" : why? (argument esseulé)

-- G7tiiR (talk) 14:54, 21 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "It's related to the trade off between security and accessibility"

SelimLakhdar (talk) 09:34, 28 January 2019 (UTC)

Challenge generation
--
 * only two lines, can you densify a bit?
 * --G7tiiR (talk) 23:11, 29 January 2019 (UTC)
 * --G7tiiR (talk) 23:11, 29 January 2019 (UTC)

CAPTCHAs

 * "was trying to achieve some goals." : which ones? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 81.199.32.90 (talk) 12:08, 22 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Done !

SelimLakhdar (talk) 15:31, 29 January 2019 (UTC)

Others approaches

 * "combining those different technique to come with a hybrid one." : what is a hybrid technique? Isn't it purely a "combination of techniques"? And why are these techniques "to come"?

--G7tiiR (talk) 13:09, 22 January 2019 (UTC)

Stealing cycles (redirection)
--
 * only one lines, can you also densify a bit?
 * --G7tiiR (talk) 23:11, 29 January 2019 (UTC)
 * --G7tiiR (talk) 23:11, 29 January 2019 (UTC)

intro

 * Second paragraph : "This test", the reference is not clear. The previous sentence doesn't speak about an only test.
 * Done !
 * Second paragraph : "This test ... for a bot", this sentence is redundant compared to the previous. Maybe maintain only the second part (after ',').
 * Done !
 * The paragraphs 3, 4 and 5 are on the same subject so they can be regroup. Avoid isolated sentences.
 * You can add the wiki reference for "bot".
 * Done !

History and evolution

 * The paragraphs 2 and 3 can be regroup.
 * 5th paragraph : In the last sentence, modify the second ',' to "and"
 * The paragraphs 4 and 5 can be regroup.

Usage and utility

 * You can add the wiki reference for "front-end", "back-end" and "layer"
 * Done !
 * Modify the ';' to ':' before the ref 11.
 * Done !
 * In last sentence of this section, put the point before ref 13.
 * Done !

Usability/accessibility

 * Remove the '.' after ref 16.
 * Done !
 * First paragraph : the 3th sentence is redundant compared to the previous.
 * Paragraph 2 and 3 : Specify when studies were conducted.
 * Done !
 * The paragraphs 3 and 4 can be regroup.
 * Done !

Security

 * Specify who are Basso and al.
 * Done ! link in the ref
 * The sentence with "0.01%" is always in the previous section.

AI usage

 * Remove the '.' after the ref 33.
 * Done !
 * Move the '.' after ref 35 before ref 34.
 * Done !

Segmentation resistance

 * Regroup the two paragraphs (Avoid isolated sentences).
 * Done !

Challenge generation

 * Regroup the two paragraphs (Avoid isolated sentences).
 * Done !

Public Sources

 * You can add the wiki reference for "database".
 * Done !

CAPTCHAs

 * The paragraphs 2 and 3 can be regroup.
 * Done !
 * Put the '.' before the ref 52.
 * Done !
 * You can add the wiki reference for "noise" (in "Text-Based CAPTCHA" point)
 * I didn't find a related article
 * They are no references for each item of the list, is it normal ?
 * Done !

Attacks on HIP

 * Remove the '.' after the ref 55
 * Done !
 * Before the ref56, modify <<. ">> to <<".>>
 * We normally use ""

OCR

 * You can add the wiki reference for "binarization".
 * Done !

Machine learning

 * Specify who are Bursztein and al.
 * Try to regroup the paragraphs.
 * Done !

Stealing cycles

 * Use the full word "pornographic" not "porn"
 * Done !

ref et biblio

 * Remove the parenthesis to the references.
 * The references are not linked to the biblio, here an example :
 * For the references to a website or a pdf document for example, it's better to use a External Link section. Here an example :
 * We had problems with our template, i don't know why it doesn't work :(
 * We had problems with our template, i don't know why it doesn't work :(

MedhiB (talk) 00:29, 30 January 2019 (UTC) SelimLakhdar (talk) 10:15, 30 January 2019 (UTC)