User talk:Selintopac

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Hello, Selintopac, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Overall, the information looks good, it would be better if the writer adds a little more information in certain areas and fix some grammatical errors and also fix the way they cited sources. Some parts should have commas and better word choices should be used for instance you stated, "...has been involved in panda diplomacy multiple times." Instead, it could be said, "...has dealt with panda diplomacy several occasions." Chriisty (talk) 16:08, 24 October 2019 (UTC)