User talk:Selkihel/sandbox

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1)	Lead Section: This article has a strong lead which introduces the topic and stresses its importance. The lead is not missing any important information. The sentence about climate may is unnecessary for the lead. 2)	Structure: The article has a clear and organised structure. The article should include embedded links 3)	Balanced Coverage: The section paragraph lengths are appropriate and the paragraphs reflect the relevant information. 4)	Neutrality: The language in the article is neutral. I could not guess the views of the authors 5)	Sources: The article uses several well sourced and reliable sources.169.228.214.135 (JSilver97 (talk) 03:09, 4 December 2019 (UTC)

1. Good lead section makes it clear and what the main issue you are addressing is. 2. Article needs more embedded links but has good structure that makes it easier to read. 3. provide more documents from the world bank and the IDA or bank that approves the loans. 4. the language is proper and used effectively to convey a informational tone that explains the circumstances. 5. good research but try to get more statistical data to show how project flow functions. P Gamaliel (talk) 04:37, 4 December 2019 (UTC)pGamaliel