User talk:Semeranoa1/WikiProject Draft

Your lead was very impressive! It provided a clear overview of Starrah’s career, her career highlights through which the reader can see why she is notable. The only change I would make is to maybe limit the amount of her accolades listed at the top. While it is very strong the amount of blue link’s is distracting from the paragraph content itself. Your listing of her songs and writing credits was extremely impressive and looks great! I would also separate out the section between early life and career. If you could provide more information the artistry section like more information on her writing process or her being rejected for being too urban in studio sessions. I think talking more about her artistry would really demonstrate why she has grown to success and why she is notable in the music industry. The most important thing is just formatting the article to make it more succinct and easily readable to th reader who may be overwhelmed by multiple paragraphs in an entry. Overall this Wikipedia entry is very exemplary work! There are so many things that I took away from the level of detail and information you put into your article that I will use to improve my own! Also, don’t forget citations in your final draft!