User talk:Semianduzi/Napoleon Avenue

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You've got some really good information in here on Napolean Ave. Right now, though, it's just a big chunk of random pieces of information that may or may not be true. You need to start shaping the article by including headings and subheadings that organize it into a meaningful flow of information. YOu also need to cite all of your sources. Some of the sections don't make much sense for this article. The paragraph of culture, for example, is completely inappropriate here.

Remember also with your writing that you need to take an informational, neutral tone. You can't write this the way you would write an essay for another class.

jtodd1973 22:01, 6 March 2021 (UTC)