User talk:Semigdio/sandbox

To be very honest with you, this piece on Beignets is a grammar and spelling chaos; however, I do see a lot of room for improvement specifically when it comes to dictating the origins of the pastry. For example, a pastry does not "migrate" humans and animals migrate from one area to another, while something like a pastry is imported, exported, taught, or even influenced by earlier versions albeit from various parts of the world. Moreover, your grammar and spelling mistakes are too abundant, your misspelling of the word "eat" and "Canadians" make the piece appear thoughtless, also the grammar mistakes when listing descriptions or adjectives was absurd; such as, when describing the very tasty pastry you dictate "puffy hot sweet" while it should be something more like this: "puffy, hot, and sweet" or "the beignet a puffy, hot, sweet pastry..." furthermore, I would say the piece appears to have little to no research behind it, while also displaying a large gap between what is expected grammatically and what was presented. On the bright side, your description of what is needed to prepare the pastry is very accurate and very helpful. More importantly, your brief introduction into the different varieties of the pastries is also very helpful and interesting.