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Thank you for clarifying that you are not her. Nevertheless, if you have a conflict of interest, you must declare it. Please read the guidance below:


 * When you write about a person, you must provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that they meet the notability guidelines. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to the person or an associated organisation, press releases, YouTube, IMDB, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what the person claims or interviewing them. Note that references should be in-line so we can tell what fact each is supporting, and should not be bare urls.


 * Most of your sources are likely to me written by her or are otherwise unacceptable. You cannot use her own website, IMDB, YouTube, Vimeo, her thesis...


 * I cannot see how she meets our notability criteria linked above either as an academic, musician or actor, but even oif she does, we need independent third-party sources


 * You must write in a non-promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic, with verifiable facts, not opinions or reviews.


 * I've seen worse, but it's basically a cv


 * There shouldn't be any url links in the article, only in the "References" or "External links" sections.
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Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources. Also read Your first article. If you are writing about yourself, or someone you know as a friend, colleague, client, employer or relative, you have a conflict of interest, and you must disclose the nature of that COI. Jimfbleak - talk to me? 16:58, 7 March 2023 (UTC)


 * "Most of your sources are likely to me written by her or are otherwise unacceptable."
 * "Likely" is not good enough. Please try actually accessing them.
 * "I cannot see how she meets our notability criteria linked above either as an academic, musician or actor, but even oif she does, we need independent third-party sources"
 * You have them.
 * "I've seen worse, but it's basically a cv"
 * It states objective facts. I don't know what else you want. There are other pages (such as Ian Pace's) that have much more promotionally-inclined language.
 * I have duly removed links to IMDb, YouTube, and Vimeo, and there are still a great many other sources provided. Sentreal (talk) 17:06, 7 March 2023 (UTC)

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Current version looks much more compliant, I made these edits, YouTube is not an acceptable external link, publications don't need self-referencing and She decided she would pursue a PhD in Music at the age of thirteen. is unprovable, even if she says it herself.


 * I'm not sure of the point of the interminable list of compositions. None are wikilinked to existing Wikipedia articles, and there is no inkling of any being of particular significance. Better to list the most important rather than doing the full kitchen sink.


 * You have made virtually no edits other than this article. A reminder that you must disclose any conflict of interest. COI editing is permitted but must be declared, particularly if there is a financial relationship, for example being her manager or publicist. Undeclared COI editing can lead to a block


 * Otherwise, I'll leave this for the draft reviewers to assess Jimfbleak - talk to me? 08:33, 8 March 2023 (UTC)

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