User talk:Seobinyoon/sandbox

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We talked about this in class so I'm not going to go into too much detail.

I think the most important thing to do is just to work to include your references into the text of your article. You can find details on how to do that at Help:Referencing for beginners. You should follow those instructions and use tags to use in-text references.

Once this is done, I think you can go ahead and move your article into the main "(Article)" namespace. Good luck! You're off to a good start! — m a k o ๛  01:19, 24 October 2015 (UTC)