User talk:Seolgiyu/sandbox

I think your wikipedia page is nicely organized and well written. I enjoy the use of contents and like how it is short and to the point. The accuracy of information is credible as you have referenced them. There seems to be no spelling or grammar errors. I believe to make your wiki page more effective, you could add images of the green buildings to provide a greater understanding. For example, when you talk about the C.K building being the first green building built ever, if you could provide images it would make your point more valid. In addition, when you talk about the initiatives I think if you could elaborate more on how they help UBC with sustainability for examples, which buildings they have modified and what are specific guidelines that each building has to follow would help make clear of the what green initiatives consist of. In addition, I believe providing stats of how much reduction in energy, waste, etc is being done by these green buildings in UBC compared to other buildings, would help nail this topic.

Thanks! and good job Sharon Sehrai — Preceding unsigned comment added by SharonSehrai (talk • contribs) 10:35, 4 March 2013 (UTC)

Hi,

I thought your topic was interesting. I liked how you implemented point form, this made it a lot easier to read. I also thought you had a good amount of referencing which is good to provide many different points of view. On the other hand, I thought your topic could have been more applicable or relatable. It would have been beneficial to elaborate more on some examples of UBC and sustainability. For example, including numerical values. Overall, I think you did a good job.

Shannon Keefe — Preceding unsigned comment added by Shannon keefe3 (talk • contribs) 23:04, 11 April 2013 (UTC)