User talk:Sere.fed/sandbox

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This is my revenge on you. Joking. By the way gallionella ipertext doesn't work it is in red Gabrieledef96 (talk) 13:37, 11 December 2019 (UTC)

Hello, I've noticed that the ipertext was not working, my intention was to let people know that the Gallionella page does not exist and if there is somebody interested in writing something on that IOB would feel free to create a new wikipedia page! --Sere.fed (talk) 17:48, 14 December 2019 (UTC)

Hi Sere,I’m enjoying the organization of your article! I would advise you just a change in the following sentence :" it's particullary important in the HNLC (High-nutrient, low-chlorophyll regions), where the quantity and the presence of Micronutrients is very important" ; the word "important" appears twice at the beginning at the end of the sentence,i suggest that you add conjunction.Anyway,Good Work ! — Preceding unsigned comment added by LeottaPaola (talk • contribs) 16:50, 13 December 2019 (UTC)

Hi ! I'm glad you've read my draft copy and you've enjoyed it. I've provided to correct the ripetition of "important", let me know if you like it better in the way it's written now. --Sere.fed (talk) 17:48, 14 December 2019 (UTC)

Thank you both and for your revisions, your opinions are very important for me and for the improval of my article, so if you have any more suggestion, feel free to share.

Well done Serena. Your article is very clear and well written FabyRockPhoto (talk) 11:07, 22 December 2019 (UTC) Hi Serena! your article is well written and explained! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Emanuela Di Lecce (talk • contribs) 12:15, 22 December 2019 (UTC)