User talk:Serena.m14

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Thanks for adding a Plot summary to Divergent (film). Other editors have shortened what you wrote, probably because they wanted to reduce the wordcount but the result is not so good. The film article guidelines recommend plot sections be 400-700 words. I have tried to add a few things back (and then to get wordcount I copied and pasted my version of the text into a word processor for a count of 650 words) but your version was better. I hope you will try and add back some of the details you think are most important but at the same time condensing the story so things do not get too long, and it is kept within the recommended wordcount. -- 109.79.191.228 (talk) 20:27, 28 March 2014 (UTC)