User talk:Serena Chen 009/Weiyang District, Xi'an

Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful!

My general take right now is that you're making good progress on this article, so please keep working. Be sure to incorporate feedback from the peer review. You might find it helpful to apply the peer review guide to your own article as you think about where to go next.

One thing I noticed is that the climate section is a little bit spread out with so many short paragraphs. You might find it useful to look at other similar pages to get some ideas about how to make this section shine.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 06:04, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

Go Live Approval
Hi

You are approved to go live with this article. It looks great! If you want to keep working, you can. You may also get some feedback from Wikipedians -- please let me know if anything doesn't make sense.

As a reminder, here are our go-live steps:


 * 1) Final read-through draft.
 * 2) Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
 * 3) Two browsers side by side, if you can. Code mode, not visual editor.
 * 4) Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
 * 5) Note on article talk page.
 * 6) Note at the top of your sandbox version.
 * 7) Submit a link to your article on Canvas.
 * 8) Celebrate!

Kaylea Champion (talk) 18:19, 9 February 2022 (UTC)