User talk:Serendipitykona

Your submission at Articles for creation
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Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. My comments on it are;
 * Not yet ready. First, make certain this is not copied in whole or part to another source. Second,  provide more detailed citations for the various accomplishments of his life. Third, provide some information about his basic biography--where & when he was born, where he went to school, what his first jobs were.  Fourth, do not refer to WP pages as references; Rather, link to them by putting  them with square brackets, like this: Datatel  Fifth, that last paragraph should list only major charitable activities--otherwise the bio appears too promotional. And each one listed needs references. Sixth, if he has a web page, list it as an external link. Seventhm avoid adjectives of quality like "famous" or "high-end"
 * When you have done that, resubmit the article.


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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia!  DGG ( talk ) 19:31, 5 November 2012 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Thomas Ray Davidson concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Thomas Ray Davidson, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 180 days. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Thomas Ray Davidson


Hello Serendipitykona. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Thomas Ray Davidson".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. HasteurBot (talk) 17:00, 18 December 2013 (UTC)