User talk:Serkatet/Lost-wax casting/Plantnoob Peer Review

Lead: Since there is not a formal lead paragraph maybe a strong first sentence would give the paragraph more of an introduction. Is there more information about the importance or usage of lost wax casting to the Greeks?

Clarity: Adding pictures and separating into more than one paragraph could break up information visually.

Coverage Balance: Do you think that adding more background information and meaning about the statues would help give context to the reader? Or adding the reason for a lack of statues today.

Neutrality: The paragraph is factual and to the point.

Sources: The sources provided in the sandbox notes look good! Adding these sources in will help add more context!