User talk:Sespry13

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Hello, Bioclarinetist, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Clearnose skate draft
Really nice work on your article draft. I made a few changes that are explained in my edit summaries. A couple things to do moving forward: make sure that every statement in the article can be clearly tied to a source. That means, for example, that paragraphs shouldn't end without a final source; otherwise there's no way for the reader the verify that information. The other thing is that the first paragraph or two of the article should be a lead section - the opening paragraphs should provide a summary of the article's content. Thanks. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:15, 17 March 2016 (UTC)