User talk:Sf999129/Ling Shuhua

Yanjun-Liu3 (talk) 19:58, 25 October 2020 (UTC) I think your article has a good lead, which introduces the identity and background of Lingshuhua concisely and lays a good foundation for what you are going to write next. As a tip, I think you could use more subheadings to increase the logic of your content, which might be easier for readers to understand. Also, you need more reliable sources for your articles.

Hello, I think you need to add the bibliography and citation of your resources. Then the readers will be easily to find where the statements come from. Your article includes a really clear lead. And You did a good job on adding Ling Shuhua's painting and influence in your article. It will be a good idea to add more information on those two aspects. For the structure, I think you can make the content more organized rather than simply putting it into two paragraphs. Ldc30507 (talk) 21:49, 26 October 2020 (UTC)