User talk:Sf999129/Ling Shuhua/Yanjun-Liu3 Peer Review

Yanjun-Liu3 (talk) 20:06, 24 October 2020 (UTC) I think your article has a good lead, which introduces the identity and background of Lingshuhua concisely and lays a good foundation for what you are going to write next. As a tip, I think you could use more subheadings to increase the logic of your content, which might be easier for readers to understand. Also, you need more reliable sources for your articles.