User talk:Sfetherling/sandbox

General
You don't need a heading for your page. Wikipedia will do that for you. If you delete that, the rest of your formatting in your table of contents will work better. Sweiner02 (talk) 15:51, 24 July 2015 (UTC)

For the final draft you'll need to do a lot more linking, but I'm glad to see that you've made a start on it. Sweiner02 (talk) 15:51, 24 July 2015 (UTC)

Most of this article is very well cited, although there are a few places (like diagnosis) that are missing citations. Sweiner02 (talk) 15:51, 24 July 2015 (UTC)

Very clear and informative abstract. It gives a good overall picture of what the condition is and who is effected by the condition.KJK14 (talk) 19:40, 27 July 2015 (UTC)

Mechanism
You've done a great job of explaining how the virus gets in, but you haven't quite connected the inflammation caused by the virus to the symptoms of the disease. Sweiner02 (talk) 15:51, 24 July 2015 (UTC)

The only suggestion I have in this section is that it may be helpful to mention how the virus enters the mouth. Other than that, this section is very detailed in how the virus effects the body and its systems.KJK14 (talk) 19:40, 27 July 2015 (UTC)

Symptoms
You need to do some copy editing here and a few other places. Sweiner02 (talk) 15:51, 24 July 2015 (UTC)

Are these all equally common? Do some sometimes occur but not always? Sweiner02 (talk) 15:51, 24 July 2015 (UTC)

Could you possibly explain a few of the symptoms and how you would know if you were experiencing them in this section? For example, what would loss of conjugate eye movements look like?KJK14 (talk) 19:40, 27 July 2015 (UTC)

Treatment
If it does not reach the CNS, it's not polioencephalitis, right? Sweiner02 (talk) 15:51, 24 July 2015 (UTC)

What is the expected prognosis for people who do develop polioencephalitis? How many survive? Do they have long-term issues if they do? Sweiner02 (talk) 15:51, 24 July 2015 (UTC)

For people who do not exhibit any of the symptoms, what does the prognosis look like for them in terms of quality of life, expectancy, etc...?KJK14 (talk) 19:40, 27 July 2015 (UTC)

Diagnosis
Are there any other conditions that they have to rule out when diagnosing this condition?KJK14 (talk) 19:40, 27 July 2015 (UTC)

Causes and Prevention
It may be helpful just to include the simple statement that it is a contagious condition through contact. KJK14 (talk) 19:40, 27 July 2015 (UTC)

Recent Research
Current research looks good and very interesting. Maybe could find one more recent study...?KJK14 (talk) 19:40, 27 July 2015 (UTC)