User talk:Sfgadsden/Buddhist symbolism/Jad Mada Peer Review

Additional Feedback
Content:

Although you have expanded on the research and information in the original article, I strongly advise you to continue to elaborate and provide more details in the sections describing Buddhist symbols. I recommend that you include an increased amount of relevant, well-supported, and adequately cited information in many of the other article sections, such as "Chhatra," "Triratna," "Naga," and "Lotus." I would also strongly advise adding new sections to the article to reflect your newly obtained research on the subject. As a result, you would be able to effectively contribute to the original article while also improving the reader's understanding of the significance of the different symbols in Buddhist traditions. I also suggest including and editing the lead section of the original article to reflect your new contributions and incorporated content. This way, you will be able to construct a clear, concise introduction to the ideas outlined in the following sections of the article.

Sources and References:

To maintain nobility, I recommend that you include relevant and supporting citations in your draft wherever possible. By doing this, you would be able to properly credit the educational researchers who proposed and investigated these ideas. Furthermore, I would advise you to use and reference more sources when citing the information presented in your article draft. In your draft, please consider including at least 5-7 references. This way, you can ensure that the content is verifiable and well-supported by a variety of sources that are independent of the subject. I also recommend that you reconsider your source selection, as the sources you cited are unreliable and non-scholarly. Please remember to ensure that you include peer-reviewed secondary sources that can adequately corroborate the research and content in your draft. Nonetheless, I like how you included links to other related Wikipedia pages throughout the article body to assist the reader comprehend the topic better. Jad Mada (talk) 17:10, 23 October 2022 (UTC)

--Jad Mada (talk) 17:10, 23 October 2022 (UTC)Jad Mada