User talk:Sfs-business

Hi I've removed your edit to Religious Society of Friends regarding Scattergood School. This was because it went against two important Wikipedia guidelines. The text that I removed was: "Many private Quaker schools are recognized for academic excellence and environmental stewardship. A key example is Scattergood Friends School in West Branch, Iowa where sustainability is taught on a campus with geothermal heating systems, an organic farm for food supply, and a plan for a windmill in the near future."
 * 1) The edit was displaying a non-neutral point of view and neutrality is one of the most important principles behind Wikipedia's policy. Please, read WP:NPOV.
 * 2) The being "recognised for academic excellence" implies a fact (that a reputable body has made this generalisation) which was un-sourced, please read WP:CITE to see why it is important to tell readers your sources. I would merely have highlighted the lack of citation as a problem if it weren't for the first problem.

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Yours Faithfully,

Paul Carpenter 21:07, 19 February 2007 (UTC)

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