User talk:Sgerbic/NECSS

I dunno how people usually give notes on these things. So I'm just winging it.
 * Intro
 * The logo has NECSS and you have (NECESS) at the top
 * external link to New York City Skeptics & SBM?
 * Last sentence I'd surround "in 2015" in commas. That's what I was taught to do, dunno if it's right or matters.
 * Beginnings
 * wiki link Steven Novella
 * wiki link SGU
 * don't capitalize "So" in the Feldman quote
 * Details
 * I would have "In past conferences this has maxed out attendance" be it's own sentence.'
 * Highlights
 * "bother Steve" -> "brother Steve".
 * In the Sharon Hill paragraph I think "relative" should be "relevant"
 * The Richard Wiseman quote has 2 types of quote marks
 * The James Randi section has "I recently", probably should be "who recently" and later there should be quotes.
 * link to Gotham Skeptic blog
 * Last paragraph, add "said" or some such before Julia Galef's quote
 * Table
 * wiki link Bill Nye