User talk:Sgtrab01/sandbox

Hi!

You're article is really well done. I think the information added was really useful, and the edits to the lead really improved the information you get at first glance. The formatting you added also made it much easier to read. Here's the link to the peer review I did:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sgtrab01/Whale_fall/Alithia93_Peer_Review

There were a few minor grammatical/typo errors in the article, but I think a lot of them came over from the original source, so a quick read through to address them should fix it easily. I was also confused on why you cut out the whole section on variance in decomposition. The topic seems interesting, although I do think it would be better off summarized in another section than having a whole section to itself.

Great first draft!

Alithia93 (talk) 14:45, 15 October 2019 (UTC)