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Just a note, while the community is still evaluating CXT, the temporary 5000-edit bard has been reduced to 500edits+30day old accounts. — xaosflux  Talk 04:46, 31 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Good to know. Im back! -- 15:37, 31 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Please be aware, CXT use is still under a lot of discussion, ensuring that pages you create with it are of high quality is very important. For example, Kalleguta appears to have multiple problems: it is clearly a stub, but not categorized as one, has some bad grammar (sentence starting with a lower case letter), and not assert why it is notable (this being a geography article may have a notability category exception to that (I don't normally review those types of articles directly)).  —  xaosflux  Talk 16:57, 31 July 2016 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination
I have declined your speedy deletion nomination of Rama Rama Re..., because the article does not satisfy the criterion you gave, though I admit it comes close. I wish there were a speedy deletion criterion which covered articles like this, but there isn't. I suggest you try WP:PROD or WP:AfD as ways of requesting deletion. The editor who uses the pseudonym "JamesBWatson" (talk) 20:47, 24 August 2016 (UTC)

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Speedy deletion declined: Talk:Kalleguta
Hello Shadowowl. I am just letting you know that I declined the speedy deletion of Talk:Kalleguta, a page you tagged for speedy deletion, because of the following concern: If the wikiproject is wrong we fix it not deleted the talk page. Thank you. -- GB fan 11:44, 28 August 2016 (UTC)

Trigger happy speedy deletion
Best to check the page history before you CSD. SBS One and SBS Two were both longstanding and perfectly plausible redirects defaced by an anon. editor. Easily fixed. Joe Roe (talk) 18:26, 31 August 2016 (UTC)

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DAB entry descriptions
Hello and thanks for giving some of the disambiguation pages a good cleaning. If I could offer a minor criticism, I'd like to highlight a portion of MOS:DAB regarding entry descriptions that states "Keep the description associated with a link to a minimum, just sufficient to allow the reader to find the correct link. In many cases, the title of the article alone will be sufficient and no additional description is necessary." So, we frequently don't need a description. When we do add one, while using the lede sentence of the linked article like you're doing is a great idea, it's often better to use a paraphrased or just shortened version of that sentence. It all just gets readers where they're trying to go faster. I'm probably being nitpicky, but I'm a big fan of brevity in general and especially on DAB pages. That said, I still want to extend a big thanks for helping with the DAB project and I genuinely you keep it up. Happy editing!&#32;-- Fyrael (talk) 14:11, 22 September 2016 (UTC)

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Regarding my page creations
Sorry about that. Seems like I misclicked something when I created the pages. Dat GuyTalkContribs 11:13, 8 October 2016 (UTC)

15:08:58, 12 November 2016 review of submission by LKreissig
You allege that this draft just "provides insufficient context for those unfamiliar with the subject matter" despite my latest efforts to make its description text now very stringent and precise? --LKreissig (talk) 15:08, 12 November 2016 (UTC)
 * The article is just an giant image with some phrases around it. Make the image smaller and you have more success. Maybe the text is informative, but the image ruins everything. Regards, 15:20, 12 November 2016 (UTC)
 * The topic is very much associated with and invites to impart its complexity through images, like every non-linear fractal and Wikipedia already accepted a couple of other likewise information material constellations. Is there a specific Wikipedia guideline discouraging from using large illustrating pictures only because the topic's complexity invites to illustrate that way? --LKreissig (talk) 21:04, 12 November 2016 (UTC)

Request on 16:54:06, 13 November 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by RaAndrew
Hi, I've seen you did not approve the article for The Matadors movie, I removed the line to which you were referring. That line was given to me directly by George Pan Andreas, the movie producer, same for the movie poster which i see was deleted because of copyright eventual problems. Please tell me how can I improve the article more. Thank you! Razvan

RaAndrew (talk) 16:54, 13 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Hello Razvan. About the poster, please make an undeletion request. If you got permission please send an ticket to OTRS, or cite the permission given on the undeletion request. Regards, 19:49, 13 November 2016 (UTC)

Paul Clark - declined
Hello, I would be very interested to know why this article has been declined on the grounds it 'reads like an advertisement'. Could you please advise which language in particular makes it read this way? As an educational research department, we have nothing to sell and are keen to get a page for this designer as we believe that while little known, he is worthy of recognition as you can see from the wikilinks to other people and topics. Only one of the 18 references comes from the creator of the page, the rest are external print and web articles. This page was first submitted around six months ago and it is confusing as to why this issue has been raised only now. Many thanks.

Design Archivist (talk) 10:14, 15 November 2016 (UTC)

New Page Review needs your help
Hi ,

As an AfC reviewer you're probably aware that a new user right has been created for patrolling new pages (you might even have been granted the right already, and admins have it automatically).

Since July there has been a very serious backlog at Special:NewPagesFeed of over 14,000 pages, by far the worst since 2011, and we need an all out drive to get this back down to just a few hundred that can be easily maintained in the future. Unlike AfC, these pages are already in mainspace, and the thought of what might be there is quite scary. There are also many good faith article creators who need a simple, gentle push to the Tea House or their pages converted to Draft rather than being deleted. Although New Page Reviewing can occasionally be somewhat more challenging than AfC, the criteria for obtaining the right are roughly the same. The Page Curation tool is even easier to use than the Helper Script, so it's likely that most AfC reviewers already have more than enough knowledge for the task of New Page Review.

It is hoped that AfC reviewers will apply for this right at WP:PERM and lend a hand. You'll need to have read the page at WP:NPR and the new tutorial.

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Resubmitted article
Hi Shadowowl, I have deleted all external links in the body and resubmitted my article. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Peter_Hobbs_(composer) Kind regards, Rachel Rachel Wallis (talk) 03:43, 24 November 2016 (UTC)

AfC note
Hi, just letting you know that I've accepted Astin Mansion at AfC, which you had declined. Per WP:AFCSTANDARDS, we should [a]void declining an article because it contains formatting issues like external links in the body of the text. Rather, I think it's better to be bold, make the change yourself, and then accept the article if it meets all the other inclusion criteria in the reviewing workflow. If a draft fails any of those criteria, it's best to give the submitter feedback explaining the substantive problem with the draft (notability, advertising/promotionalism, WP:NOT problems, and so on). Otherwise, the editor may resubmit after fixing the cosmetic formatting problem, only to have the draft rejected again due to the substantive problem, which would certainly be frustrating for Wikipedia newcomers! I noticed you'd also declined a few other drafts for similar reasons today, so I thought I'd drop you a line. Thanks, /wiae /tlk  21:33, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Ok, thanks for the message! -- 10:21, 27 November 2016 (UTC)
 * No problem. If you ever have any questions for other reviewers, there's a handy Reviewer Help page here; it's a good resource. And a belated welcome to AfC, by the way. Happy editing, /wiae /tlk  15:24, 27 November 2016 (UTC)

Resubmission query
Hi Shadowowl, I have made your changes and resubmitted my draft on the 23rd November but I don't see a resubmission section come up - usually I think it's a yellow section? Can you check we're still on the waiting list? It has been over 2 months since I submitted the first draft. Kind regards, Rachel Rachel Wallis (talk) 00:40, 6 December 2016 (UTC)

Talk:Rodd_Wolff
I made a review of your review. Bearian (talk) 13:57, 6 December 2016 (UTC)

BBC 12-hour Editathon - large influx of new pages & drafts expected
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16:39:22, 9 December 2016 review of submission by 70.92.163.200
As an academic, I recognize some of the concerns addressed by the editor. However, although the Chicago Lighting Institute made a pioneering contribution in the developing history of lighting, the source material that can be used to document this history is both limited and, at times, personal (letters, e.g.). Therefore, to document this history, trade journals and letters have to be employed. If you have suggestion as to alternative ways of remembering this important history, I will be very attentive.

Cordially,

David Zersen
 * Hello David. i rejected this article, because it has to be split in sections, and the sections that are there already, are incorrectly formatted.

Regards, -- 15:33, 10 December 2016 (UTC)

13:42:32, 14 December 2016 review of submission by Chris33smit
Hello,

The reason I'm asking for a re-review is that I don't understand the reason. My article is declined because it has a link to my podcast. This podcast is non-commercial and free. I have been doing this podcast for years and have had people for all walks of lives as guests. The content of these interviews are educational, noteworthy, entertaining and add to a better understanding of cultural differences. Simply mentioning that there is a podcast available, but leaving it up to the reader to go and find it does not make sense to me. Wikipedia being a complete site with references to everything should (could) not object to a link to this podcast. An earlier decline was based on so-called "peacock" talk. I have based this entry on an entry of a friend of mine who, in my view, certainly has so-called "peacock" talk (e.g. ...who is regarded as the world's leading expert in...). the link to that particular page is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Navid_Moazzez

Finally, other contributions that I have made to subjects relating to my expertise should show that I am an expert in my profession and not merely after self-promotion.

So with all the above I kindly request you to reconsider my submission.

Sincerely, Chris Smit Chris33smit (talk) 13:42, 14 December 2016 (UTC)
 * Please remove the links. The article will be not accepted by any reviewer if it contains promotional links. Also read Autobiography -- 12:38, 18 December 2016 (UTC)

Request on 22:44:58, 18 December 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by NRCBeng
Hi, I do not understand the comment you made for declining my article. What do you mean by "Remove the (P..) in the article." ? What is "(P..)" ? Thank you, NRCBeng NRCBeng (talk) 22:44, 18 December 2016 (UTC)
 * @user:NRCBeng. I made a mistake there. Feel free to resubmit it again. 17:05, 20 December 2016 (UTC)

Request on 17:09:49, 19 December 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by Orfeolille
Hello, I submitted an article for the actress Laraine Stephens for the 5th time and although I gave references of serious books on television or serious article from newspapers articles, I always get  the answer that my references are not fiable enough. I wonder if the editors are familiar with the screen and tv scenes as Laraine Stephens is a famous actress with more than 100 credits, something I don't see in some inclusion of a lot of actors or actresses who get a publication on wikipedia. I know she retired in 1983 but an encyclopedia should include people from the past as well, especially when they were popular during their prime (in the cas of Ms Stephens the 1960s and 1970s). I would appreciate that you reconsider the inclusion on wikipedia of Laraine Stephens. Thank you very much in advance. best regards Christophe Vetter (OrfeoLille)

Orfeolille (talk) 17:09, 19 December 2016 (UTC)
 * @User:Orfeolille Laraine Stephens is a famous actress with more than 100 credits  Hum, what? What are credits? 17:07, 20 December 2016 (UTC)

PS : The article needs to be split in sections.

17:34:20, 19 January 2017 review of submission by Duempel
Thank you very much for reviewing my article. I am a bit confused about the criticism concerning my sources. Every single source can be checked: all protocols from the archive, all books quoted, and the Website Link. I do not really know what else I should "offer". :-(
 * Sorry Duempel, my fault, i didn't see much links and i declined it about the links. I will accept it now. Regards, -- 20:27, 19 January 2017 (UTC)

Request on 17:19:35, 20 January 2017 for assistance on AfC submission by Petersmillard
Unicirc article draft

Thank you for reviewing my article. I will repair the references. In terms of content, I responded to the first reviewers comments and made extensive changes. Can you please give me some more guidance concerning your critique that it contains promotional text? I am also a volunteer reviewer for multiple medical journals and I try to give specific feedback to help authors improve their studies. Some more specific feedback would be very helpful here and I would very much appreciate it.

Petersmillard (talk) 17:19, 20 January 2017 (UTC)

Rollbacker
I have [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Special%3ALog&type=rights&user=&page=User%3AShadowowl granted] the "rollbacker" permission to your account. After a review of some of your contributions, I believe you can be trusted to use rollback for its intended usage of reverting vandalism, and that you will not abuse it by reverting good-faith edits or to revert-war. For information on rollback, see Administrators' guide/Rollback and Rollback feature. If you do not want rollback, contact me and I will remove it. Good luck and thanks. – Gilliam (talk) 11:17, 6 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks Gilliam! 11:19, 6 February 2017 (UTC)

3 February 2017 review of submission for ESLint
Hello, the draft was rejected because it "is not adequately supported by reliable sources". But I am not sure what source should be add. It is a computer program. The official project website is cited and the original blog post of the author presenting the project and the reason he started it. If we compare to the JSLint page, wich was accepted, it is true that the later has more references. But six out of seven are for a debate about the licence being open source or not. ESLint does not have that kind of problem since it uses an unmodified MIT licence. Should I put a link to the licence file in the repository? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.67.42.98 (talk) 08:03, 6 February 2017 (UTC)
 * It only has 1 reference, and that is the author's site. It needs more references. -- 17:14, 6 February 2017 (UTC)

Request on 18:58:56, 6 February 2017 for assistance on AfC submission by Cynthiaprose
I am confused about your comment about external links. The external links in the body of the article are supporting citations which I thought are required to be published. The external link guidance states the external link restrictions do not apply to the citations, so the external links in my article should be exempt. How do you handle the citations? Do I cite the document source without the link and then list the external link in the external link section? The citations are documents which are only found online since they are government policy memos and directives. Please advise. Thank you. CynthiaCynthiaprose (talk) 18:58, 6 February 2017 (UTC) Cynthiaprose (talk) 18:58, 6 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Wikipedia articles may include links to web pages outside Wikipedia (external links), but they should not normally be placed in the body of an article. All external links must conform to certain formatting restrictions on WP:EL. -- 19:23, 6 February 2017 (UTC)

12:05:33, 8 March 2017 review of submission by Shall22
Hi. I've had an article declined initially for insufficient notability, because I only included a Financial Times reference. I then resubmitted with several other notable references as requested and then had it declined because a reviewer said "it read like an ad". I've removed anything that smacks of commentary or praise and yet I've received another rejection. I'm a bit baffled what to do next. The company in question was the first ever to buy itself back from being a plc, to become an employee owned organisation. It received much press coverage at the time and remains an interesting case study. That's really all I'm trying to get up on Wikipedia. What can I do? What specific issues in the article "Read like an ad"? Most are taken directly from the quoted articles.

Link to article is [|here] — Preceding unsigned comment added by Shall22 (talk • contribs) 12:13, 8 March 2017 (UTC)
 * The external links in the article's body should be replaced. -- 15:23, 8 March 2017 (UTC)

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 * OK, cool - so remove all links to the company's website, yes? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Shall22 (talk • contribs) 16:35, 8 March 2017 (UTC)
 * All external links that are in the article's body (not the external links section and the references section) should be moved to the External Links section or deleted. 1 exeption : If it is a good formatted reference, it can stay (which is not now) -- 16:38, 8 March 2017 (UTC)

Thomson brand
Hello Shadowowl Many Thanks for your comments on my draft article proposal on Thomson brand. However I am still unsure on the specific corrections I should make and possible citations I should add before making a resubmission. Could you please me more specific, if possible? Many thanks in advance for your guidance best regards Moamoa17 (talk) 10:59, 8 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I think, the best way to fix this article, is to remove all the references and adding them on a correct way. Not on plain text. Regards, 15:25, 8 March 2017 (UTC)

Ways to improve Koijukari
Hi, I'm TonyBallioni. Shadowowl, thanks for creating Koijukari!

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Ben Nijboer has been accepted
 Ben Nijboer, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! joe deckertalk 16:10, 16 April 2017 (UTC)
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Disambiguation link notification for May 2
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Catholic Integrated Commuity - urgently asking for help!
Dear Shadowowl,

as you kindly accepted and published my first article I would like to ask you for your support:

Only the day before yesterday I noticed that I made a great mistake. The title should be Catholic Integrated Community!!

I left out the "n" in Community. Can you help me to repair the name?

I already wrote 3 messages on my own talk-page, but no one would answer.

As soon as this typo is corrected, I will further work on improving my article with regard to references, criteria etc.

Your answer is very much appreciated!

Paddy Pillow (talk) 19:53, 10 May 2017 (UTC)
 * ✅. Thanks for reporting to me.-- 11:15, 11 May 2017 (UTC)

Apostolic Christian Church
Hi,

just for explanation: I removed your disambiguated link with Apostolic Christian Church, because this would lead to an error - this group belongs exclusively to Roman Catholic Church and to nothing else.

Paddy Pillow (talk) 15:18, 12 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your explanation. -- 16:21, 12 May 2017 (UTC)

Thank you!
Dear Shadowowl,

thank you very much for your quick and most effective help!

Now there are still some tasks to be done and I could very well need some further advise.

How do I insert the missing criteria?

Criteria could be: - Roman Catholic Church - Lay Movement - Association of believers - Germany

What else would you propose?

And then there are redirecting links to be found - but this will be hard, because within the English speaking world this group of Christians is not well known yet. Could there also be links to German Wikipedia?

Would you kindly let me have your opinion?

Thanks in advance!

Paddy Pillow (talk) 19:43, 11 May 2017 (UTC)
 * I would ask on the WikiProject Catholicism. I don't know very much about religion, and there they know (and can help you) more. Regards, 16:29, 12 May 2017 (UTC)

Draft for Michele Ragusa
I did my best adding an infobox and was able to get Michele's date of birth (although actresses usually don't like to reveal their age...lol) I appreciate your support. I wanted to add a production photo from her Broadway performance of Young Frankenstein but I didn't take the photo and don't own it so thought I better not add it. Thanks again. Parplaywright (talk) 02:47, 14 May 2017 (UTC)

Draft for Tom Gildred
Hey ShadowOwl, saw your comment about the references on https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Tom_Gildred

I removed the second half (as it was duplicate of the properly formatted section). Take a look now and see if it's alright. Thanks so much for reviewing! JohnPRyan (talk) 19:40, 18 May 2017 (UTC)

My Article
Hello, I saw my translation draft for d'art & de culture was rejected, I want to understand, because maybe you didn't notice the comment, since I had not put a date to the last one? Otherwise, I don't understand how the fact that public libraries, totally independent of the magazine, picking it to add it to their catalogue for the users (which does take at least a little work and effort, furthermore because they are not in the same area) was not validated as a "attracting notice." of a "reliable source" ? 62.193.61.190 (talk) 15:27, 19 May 2017 (UTC)
 * 4 sources, with none at a major news site, is not enough to estable notability. -- 17:54, 19 May 2017 (UTC)

Draft for Friends Like These (play)
Hi ShadowOwl,

I've gone ahead and removed the unreliable source from my references, however I can't find a "resubmit" button to request approval. Please take a look again when you get a moment. Thank you for reviewing!

EDIT: Never mind. Upon refreshing the page, the resubmit button appeared. Resubmitted. Thanks again!

Theatrerat81 (talk) 22:35, 20 May 2017 (UTC)

About Draft:William McNamara (soldier)
Hello Shadowowl. I see a couple of days ago you rejected 's Draft:William McNamara (soldier) because it was non-notable. I would respectably beg to differ. WP:SOLDIER advises that we accept articles on people who've won the highest military honor of valor for whatever country they were serving. McNamara has won the Medal of Honor, and that's not in dispute. There's also this military report which perfectly establishes his career. I know it's not a lot, but I would say that it's worthy -Indy beetle (talk) 21:16, 20 May 2017 (UTC)
 * I accepted it. Thanks for improving the article! -- 10:06, 21 May 2017 (UTC)

Ways to improve NGC 956
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About the redirecting of Republic of Taiwan (1895)
Republic of Formosa is a short-lived republic which was established on the Taiwan island in 1895, also known as Republic of Taiwan. Formosa is an old name of the Taiwan Island.

The page Taiwan refers to the state which was officially known as Republic of China (ROC), not Republic of Taiwan. Furthermore, ROC was established in 1911, not 1895.

So it is sure that Republic of Taiwan (1895) should be redirected to Republic of Formosa, not Taiwan. Hope you to know that. --Wind2323 (talk) 09:43, 20 June 2017 (UTC)

A barnstar for you!

 * No problem! -- 16:32, 20 June 2017 (UTC)

16:09:18, 22 June 2017 review of submission by Mastercourington
I would like further explanation of what would make this article acceptable. I actually wanted to make edits about her 9th dan testing, of which she did pass, and is now, officially the highest ranked American female in Taekwondo.

I have provided links to the information. Is it because it is not linked to within the actual body? Do I need separate links? Are certain things not trustworthy? This is my first time building a wikipedia page, and it is part of my project for testing for my 6th degree black belt. Though I have had web building experience, the wiki site is a bit new to me, and I am struggling to understand the ramifications of how this works. I feel that my contribution matches what I have seen in several other Wiki articles.
 * The article has 2 references. It needs more to be accepted. I also see that the picture is missing, probably removed because of copyright violation. Please remove the link to the picture, or add it again with an valid license. -- 17:25, 22 June 2017 (UTC)

11:57:17, 28 June 2017 review of submission by Aamkaped
Have added links to newspapers and other third party sources, please do take a look Aamkaped (talk) 11:57, 28 June 2017 (UTC)
 * There are some citation errors, and please remove the L-Sep character at External Links (image) -- 14:52, 28 June 2017 (UTC)

09:41:48, 28 June 2017 review of submission by EleanorLC
I am unsure how to make it read less like a tour guide, I have received a lot of feedback through the tree house, and many people have helped me edit this page to make it acceptable. I had a look at the West Highland Way wikipedia page (a very similar walk), and I feel that this follows the safe structure and style of that page. Could you please provide me with more feedback so that I can edit this?EleanorLC (talk) 09:41, 28 June 2017 (UTC)
 * This leg of the route rated medium level difficulty and things like that, belong in a tour guide, not in Wikipedia. Regards, 14:47, 28 June 2017 (UTC)
 * I have removed the mention of difficult ratings, would this be sufficient to resubmit or are their other things I should change? EleanorLC (talk) 13:27, 29 June 2017 (UTC)
 * It is fine now, feel free to resubmit. Regards, 16:09, 29 June 2017 (UTC)

Request on 10:04:16, 29 June 2017 for assistance on AfC submission by Coxnix
Hello Admin :) I would like to know more details about the declined AfC Darft:Sanjana Jon

cosnis 10:04, 29 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Hello. At first, I am not an admin. I used the wrong decline reason there. The correct one should be that the section Early Life is not sourced. Also there is an grey box in the text. Please remove it, as it will prevent reviewers from accepting your article. Regards, 16:12, 29 June 2017 (UTC)

Request on 09:01:12, 2 July 2017 for assistance on AfC submission by ECURBEC
Hello! First thanks for taking the time to look at my article The 'How to do good' Philanthropy Programme. I have resubmitted it and I think I have taken out incorrect/inappropriate external links as well as making a few improvements (I hope). Is it possible for you to have another look? Or is this an inappropriate request? If so apologies in advance.ECURBEC (talk) 09:01, 2 July 2017 (UTC)

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09:22:39, 3 July 2017 review of submission by Coverdale1234
Hello ShadowOwl, Could you please let me know which links are the problem? (copy and paste in your reply)

Many thanks
 * The 2 under the Books header, and another one at Exhibitions/Group Shows are not permitted. Regards, -- 09:30, 3 July 2017 (UTC)

Thank you kindly — Preceding unsigned comment added by Coverdale1234 (talk • contribs) 09:50, 3 July 2017 (UTC)

Drafts
Please remember to speedy G11 or G12 a Draft when it applies, as this was the case for Draft:VCfSee - Virtual Currency from Surplus Electrical Energy. SwisterTwister  talk  17:31, 3 July 2017 (UTC)