User talk:Shadowowl/Archive 4

Revieuw of Oh (North Korean defector)
Dear Shadowowl,

Could you please review the Oh (North Korean defector) article and give some more feedback?

Kind Regards,

(Bleibloem (talk) 09:33, 26 November 2017 (UTC)).

AfC notification: Draft:Characters of the Zero Escape series has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Characters of the Zero Escape series. Thanks! ~Kvng (talk) 14:35, 8 December 2017 (UTC)

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Drafts
Anyone who does much work in NPP or AFC will make errors. I suspect that for good reviewers 2% to 5% is about the usual rate, and I don't think anyone can really do better than 1%. I make errors, I think about 2% in both processes, people tell me about some of them. Some are just slips of the mouse i selecting from the list of reasons. There similarly seem to be a few errors in a few of your recent AfC reviews at about the same rate as mine:
 * You recently rejected Draft:R. K. Chetty Pandipati for the reason " This article contains external links. They are not permitted in the article's body. Use references instead." That's not really a reason for rejecting an AfC. It's the sort of thing that can be easily fixed in mainspace-- wither by removing them or by converting them into references. Since he's an IEEE Fellow, which is unquestionably notable by WP:PROF, I accepted it.  It needs further work, like most bios.
 * You declined Deeft:Hugo_Gottesmann when the content was at this stage for "This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources" But every element of significance was well supported, and the article would clearly have passed AfD (he unquestionably meets WP:MUSICIAN --   member of a famous quartet, and prize winning recordings, and other considerations.   There were some unreliable sources, but the article did not rely on them. I cleaned it up a little & accepted it, and would have accepted it in the earlier state also.  It too needs further work, especially the linking to organization names.
 * Catha (mythology) also has fully sufficient sources, even though not in our usual format, and should not have been marked as "not supported by sufficient sources" I accepted it also just as it was.
 * You marked Draft:Dancing with the Stars (U.S. season 26) as no-context. But no-context means that one cannot tell what the actual subject is. This is clearly a season of a famous show. The season is in the future, and I doubt there is at this time enough information for an article, but that's not the same thing.
 * In the other direction, you accepted Tel Haim even though it had no references at all. That's below the minimum standard. There may be, of course.

 DGG ( talk ) 01:17, 27 January 2018 (UTC)
 * The first one was in the time I declined articles for that reason. Someone told me that I shouldn't decline for that, and I haven't declined articles for that reason anymore since July/August. Why did I accept Tel Haim? Because I compared the article to more of the articles in the template, like, which also doesn't have sources. I thought it was acceptable. Thanks for your explanation. I have no comment on the other 3. I might clicked too fast on those. Regards, -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  12:51, 27 January 2018 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Greece Debt Free


Hello, Shadowowl. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Greece Debt Free".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Legacypac (talk) 16:52, 1 February 2018 (UTC)

05:15:38, 17 February 2018 review of submission by Dylanwhite56
Dylanwhite56 (talk) 05:15, 17 February 2018 (UTC)

Hi, cleaned up article and requesting re-review. Thanks.Dylanwhite56 (talk) 05:15, 17 February 2018 (UTC)

Draft: Rob Niter
Hi Shadowowl  I've made corrections to wikipedia article and removed WP:CITEKILL from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Rob_Niter  Are you able to review? Thank you! Dylanwhite56 (talk) 06:55, 23 February 2018 (UTC)

Bavli
Hi Shadowowl,

I noticed that you have been moving a lot of articles from the mainspace to draft space. It looks like these moves are automated (not sure if they are intentional per-article?). Although in effect it's a "soft deletion" process, there is no deletion rationale. While for one-line articles with just one contributor (usually a new user), there is a policy-based rationale for making such moves, this is not the case for more established articles such as Bavli—which has been edited by a number of established editors, and contains real content. Please note that having no sources isn't in itself a reason for moving an article to AFC or deleting it, especially when there is no dispute about the subject matter's notability. If this move was completely automated (no input from you), it may be worth tweaking the script's criteria.

I have reverted the move, but am afraid that the script might have made more changes that I am not aware of, that have not been reverted.

Cheers, Ynhockey (Talk) 09:20, 26 February 2018 (UTC)

08:12:05, 22 March 2018 review of submission by Phantasmagoria65
Phantasmagoria65 (talk) 08:12, 22 March 2018 (UTC)

Hi there. I'm confused about why my article has been declined due to inadequately reliable sources? The series has been officially announced in multiple entertainment publications and websites-- including the three cited in my original article: Daily Variety, The Hollywood Reporter, and Deadline Hollywood. I would appreciate your reconsideration and/or explanation. Thanks.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Blasenburg (March 22)
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Request on 16:58:52, 22 March 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by Ashlee444
Hello, I am working on an article for Johnny Douglas (record producer) and it was recently declined due to being too dependent on Disogs. I have found many other sources for proof of his notability including articles in billboard and other music magazines. Many of The songs he has written, produced, composed, remixed etc have charted. He has nominated for an notable award with his work for George Michael. All of this has also been cited. I understand wikipedia discogs is not considered a reliable source however, due to his work being mostly of that of the producer and composer, the majority of his proof his found in the liner notes of cds & albums, hence the discogs references. If I remove these references would the article be approved with his billboard magazine, chart information, award information and the artist websites where he is mentioned as working on their work? I do believe this proves notability on its own based on what i have read about music notability. Or is there a way to cite the albums without using discogs? Thank for your help and reviewing the article! Ashlee444 (talk) 16:58, 22 March 2018 (UTC)Ashlee444

Ashlee444 (talk) 16:58, 22 March 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: NGC 6448 has been accepted
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 * It was deleted? -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  14:16, 24 March 2018 (UTC)

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A page you started (St. Mary's church (Sønderborg)) has been reviewed!
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A barnstar for you!

 * Thanks for the barnstar! -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  18:17, 29 March 2018 (UTC)

Please don't delete more of my drafts
They are all actively being worked on. Abyssal (talk) 16:09, 2 April 2018 (UTC)
 * They aren't. They have been abandoned for more than 6 months and qualify for WP:G13. Please move your drafts into userspace. -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  16:13, 2 April 2018 (UTC)
 * They are. Abyssal (talk) 16:14, 2 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Then move them into userspace. I can't see if a page is been worked on when it's inactive for 6 months. -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  16:16, 2 April 2018 (UTC)
 * They're literally almost complete. Once my active bot request is fulfilled they'll be ready for mainspace. Abyssal (talk) 16:17, 2 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Then at least do a edit into your submissions so they won't appear on the Abandoned drafts list. When the list is updated tomorrow other users will CSD-tag it. -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  16:19, 2 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Eh, hopefully I can get a user with bot permissions to do something by then. Abyssal (talk) 16:20, 2 April 2018 (UTC)
 * This is the list. Anyways, I edited the pages so they won't appear there.-- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  16:27, 2 April 2018 (UTC)

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Draft: Behrooz Saffarian
Hi there, Thanks for your review. I think I need your help. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hossein.kh.nejad (talk • contribs) 13:50, 3 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Hello. The policy about citing Wikipedia is WP:CIRCULAR. -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  16:15, 3 April 2018 (UTC)

12:57:04, 3 April 2018 review of submission by Cityloop
Added more notable references. Deleted Youtube as a reference. Cityloop (talk) 12:57, 3 April 2018 (UTC)
 * It is in the big queue now. It may take some time before it gets a review again. -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  16:16, 3 April 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ottenby nature reserve has been accepted
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Draft: Thomas Kuzhinapurath
The draft "Thomas Kuzhinapurath" is based on the reliable sources. See, "Encyclopedia of South Indian Literature" ISBN 978-81-261-3740-4 (https://books.google.co.in/books/about/Encyclopaedia_Of_South_Indian_Literature.html?id=t6QpAQAAIAAJ&redir_esc=y). Pages 268-270 give a rather long account of the life and literary contributions of Thomas Kuzhinapurath.Kindly search Kuzhinapurath within the above said encyclopedia. (https://books.google.co.in/books?id=8qQpAQAAIAAJ&dq=9788126137404&focus=searchwithinvolume&q=Kuzhinapurath). More over the citations from you tube are programmes of the famous TV channels in India Doordarsan, Karali People.
 * These are reliable sources, however, the not reliable sources, the Youtube links, are still there. -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  10:52, 4 April 2018 (UTC)

You just depend on the reliable sources and approve the article please. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 116.68.76.82 (talk) 11:59, 7 April 2018 (UTC) The so-called unreliable sources are removed and reliable sources are added. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 116.68.76.82 (talk) 12:22, 7 April 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: MON 89034 (April 8)
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10:16:38, 9 April 2018 review of submission by DavidGSDavies
I have added two citation to the head. I'm afraid I had not appreciated that it was necessary for the head to be sourced when this was a summary of the body of the article which was well documented with citations. I'm not sure that I understand the criticism of containing promotional words. I have made the following change which may help. The term "the Gross Process" was widely used in the 1950's and 60's, when it was the process was thought likely to become widely adopted. This is no longer the case for both technical and economic reasons; I have therefore changed it to "the mono-chloride process".

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Hall of Residence, Kelvin Grove (April 9)
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Request on 15:31:27, 9 April 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by Chrisdevelop
Draft:Derek Williams (musician)

The Discogs copyright issue arose because I supplied Dr Williams with a draft of my opening introduction for him to verify its accuracy, which he then paraphrased and submitted to Discogs, without realising this would infringe copyright. I am the sole author of the material. Dr Williams has now arranged for this to be removed, so the only copy should now be that on Wikipedia.

Chrisdevelop (talk) 15:31, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
 * There is also a large part that seems to be copied from his website. However, the review script is quite buggy when listing copyright violations in the decline reason, and I couldn't add a second site. Is the article copied from the website, or the website from the article? -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  19:01, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
 * If you’re referring to the Home page, then yes, that was the same text that was displayed on Discogs, however that was also removed today following your warning, for identical reasons. The DW website Home page and the Discogs text were both paraphrasing of my Wikipedia article.  The Wikipedia article was written first, not the other way round.   I had asked Dr Williams to verify the intro text and was aware he was using it to update his website, but until your flagging of this issue, it hadn’t occurred to me that this would be tantamount to a copyright violation. The Discogs and derekwilliams.net website have now both been cleaned of this material, so now it is back to being the exclusive property of Wikipedia. Chrisdevelop (talk) 23:01, 9 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Are you satisfied the copyright problem is now resolved? The decline notice is still up on the page.  Thanks!  Chrisdevelop (talk) 13:28, 10 April 2018 (UTC)
 * The article is resubmitted, and I've left a message for future reviewers (the article is now in the queue, we have a backlog of almost 2000 drafts) that the copyright violation appearing in copyvio-tool is a false positive. The decline reason always stays when resubmitted. -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  14:58, 10 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks! Regards Chrisdevelop (talk) 15:23, 10 April 2018 (UTC)

Deletion discussion about NGC 3545B
Hello, Shadowowl,

I wanted to let you know that there's a discussion about whether NGC 3545B should be deleted. Your comments are welcome at Articles for deletion/NGC 3545B.

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Thanks,

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Menashiya
Hi, As for your tagging of Menashiyas: I see the Hebrew version cites quite a few sources, perhaps it is an idea to ask for translation from the he.wp first, before deleting the article? Huldra (talk) 22:33, 13 April 2018 (UTC)
 * These articles were created by a sockpuppet during a bot run. It is better to WP:TNT it and wait for someone to translate it from he.wp. -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  10:40, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

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 * I've searched everywhere for references, but could not find any except maps. -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  16:18, 14 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Maps are fine, Shadowowl. Was it maps where you got the information you have written in the article so far? Thanks, Boleyn (talk) 16:49, 14 April 2018 (UTC)
 * The stub was translated from nlwiki. I could have added a infobox where the source would be maps. It is a pretty generic article about a generic place which there are not a lot (if there are any) sites to reference. Normally I expand the stub from nlwiki with references from svwiki, but this one had no article there.-- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  17:01, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Thomas Ernst Josef Wiedemann has been accepted
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21:48:30, 15 April 2018 review of submission by Dreamer14513181
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Thank you for you comment, It helps me improve article with reliable sources as you noted. Please review now.

Dreamer14513181 (talk) 21:48, 15 April 2018 (UTC)
 * It is now in the queue, and will get a review within 2 months. -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  11:29, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mappleborough Green has been accepted
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Shaft (film series)
Just got your feedback on the draft...what part of the references doesn't match up for you? I included plenty of references where they were needed.--DisneyMetalhead (talk) 05:46, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
 * , Wikipedia cant be a source for itself. IMDB is unreliable, and Google Searches are just Google Searches, you need to link to a specific page. -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  11:30, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
 * , I don't think I put Wikipedia as a reference....and really IMDb is actually the equivalent of a Facebook for Hollywood. What references are you talking about on my Shaft film series draft?--DisneyMetalhead (talk) 02:51, 18 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Went ahead and corrected some references. Added new ones as well. That was a very difficult page to create as references regarding some of the films are very slim. Thanks for your help!--DisneyMetalhead (talk) 03:43, 18 April 2018 (UTC)
 * You say that IMDB is the equivalent of Facebook. Thats why we wont allow it. It is tolerated if it is the only issue. -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  17:33, 18 April 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Michael Takitaki (April 19)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Heinrich Grimm has been accepted
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Draft:Diyal
Sir I thank you for pointing out the non-reliable sources from my [|submission]. By your help I have corrected it now so I request you to please review it. Thank You in Advance Regards, Don.chaudhry — Preceding unsigned comment added by Don.chaudhry (talk • contribs) 10:46, 21 April 2018 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Lateral Force Transmission in Skeletal Muscle has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Lateral Force Transmission in Skeletal Muscle. Thanks! Legacypac (talk) 03:49, 23 April 2018 (UTC)

22:41:26, 24 April 2018 review of submission by Veet Nisha
Hello Shadowowl!

Thank you for reviewing my article on the artist Andrei Rabodzeenko. I read your reasons for rejecting the article: that it "reads more like an advertisement than an encyclopedia article." I would be grateful for a little more specific direction as to what language has that character, as I understand the NPOV policy and tried to use objective language.

Also, your comment says that the article should "refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources." But the article does have four inline citations to external sources (reviews of exhibits), as well as a list of additional third-party press about this artist. So again, I thought that I had observed Wikipedia guidelines, and substantiated the objective significance of this subject.

I look forward to your response and appreciate your guidance.

Sincerely, Veet Nisha (talk) 22:41, 24 April 2018 (UTC)

Veet Nisha (talk) 22:41, 24 April 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Lateral Force Transmission in Skeletal Muscle has been accepted
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Draft : Diyal
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Diyal Sir I appreciate your review and the comments on my draft so I have improved it accordingly to you comment so I request you to re review it Thanks Don.chaudhry Don.chaudhry (talk) 06:16, 2 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Hi. I currently don't have access to my computer. I will reply when I get back. Shadowowl on mobile (talk) 13:11, 3 May 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nahal Hermon has been accepted
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Draft of "Against The Grain"
Thanks for your review. You said: "Nothing really changed since last review. Remove citation 6 till 14, 16 till 22, 24 till 30 and 32 and resubmit."

I have removed most of those. I left in a couple that provide the page number for a long quotation from the book. This seems appropriate to me but I can remove those if you prefer. I also edited for brevity in a couple of places.

Please let me know if we should make other changes.

Here's the link again... https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Against_The_Grain:_A_Deep_History_of_the_Earliest_States

Street.alex (talk) 15:34, 6 May 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Daniel R. Schwartz has been accepted
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Request on 18:10:12, 7 May 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by PKiwi
Hi, I've been trying to create a page on Theia, the singer, but it's just been declined because it says You Tube is not a reliable reference. It is only one of the references I supplied, and the link was to official music videos and many of them have more than 40,000 views, which clearly indicates they are from a reputable, established singer, which Theia is. Is this the only reason my submission was rejected? If I delete links to YOu Tube will that help? I don't know how to make the submission suitable? Please help.

PKiwi (talk) 18:10, 7 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Deleting Youtube refs is a good step. -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  18:12, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

01:03:12, 8 May 2018 review of submission by 2A02:C7D:3E89:BE00:55C3:337C:AC36:9260
References have been flagged as un-verifiable. I beg to differ. We are talking about a World Bank Group publication here. What is more verifiable? 2A02:C7D:3E89:BE00:55C3:337C:AC36:9260 (talk) 01:03, 8 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Vimeo is a video site, those are unreliable. -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  06:27, 8 May 2018 (UTC)

Request on 15:02:35, 8 May 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by Genbosmit
In response to reviewer comment: "Facebook isn't a reliable source.": The Facebook Live feed referenced is from the official Facebook page for BBC Technology News, which has over 500,000 followers. The reporter is Michelle Fleury, the BBC's New York business correspondent and a reporter for BBC World News. Fleury has covered American business and economics for more than 10 years. Please reconsider this as a reliable source.

Genbosmit (talk) 15:02, 8 May 2018 (UTC)
 * And still it isn't. Facebook is unreliable. -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  15:07, 8 May 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Stoneman (band) has been accepted
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04:21:45, 9 May 2018 review of submission by 203.115.97.156
203.115.97.156 (talk) 04:21, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
 * What do you want to say? -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  15:17, 9 May 2018 (UTC)

Draft:Origin Suite
Shadowowl,

From the comment below yours (Draft:Origin Suite), the artist seems to not necessarily need a page. The album has numerous write ups to include a pretty important one by well known critic Brian Morton in the UK (in the Jazz Journal). If that is the only justification for not accepting the article, Bkissin had addressed it. It is truly unclear at this point what are the guidelines. The following is that Bkissin's comment...

Comment: I noticed a part of WP:NALBUM that contradicts my previous decline and comment.

An album is an officially released recording by a notable musician or ensemble is not by itself reason for a standalone article. Conversely, an album does not need to be by a notable artist or ensemble to merit a standalone article if it meets the general notability guideline.

Shelyric
 * Ok. I have nominated an album/song page for deletion before because the author did not have an article, and it was deleted. so I thought that was the policy. I have reverted my review and will let it over to another reviewer. -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  15:19, 9 May 2018 (UTC)

To answer your question...
Yes, Draft:Noor ul Ain was nearly identical (a couple extra sentences but otherwise the same), so I G5'd it. Primefac (talk) 15:11, 10 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks User:Primefac! -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  15:24, 10 May 2018 (UTC)

Hello m author of Livermore Gurdware Sahib Tri-Valley Sikh center
So my question is you moved the article to draft space stating it needs citations which I did include in the references below so what else is needed more ever this is not a business place its a Temple or a place of worship.! Secondly I have added more sources in the references stating the importance pf the topic in media so can you help what Should I do so my article is moved to mainspace.??

thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Taransingh (talk • contribs) 01:58, 11 May 2018 (UTC)
 * The problem wasn't entirely the citations. The problem was mostly the broken English and the fact that you moved it to mainspace before it was accepted. -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  11:50, 11 May 2018 (UTC)

Thank you so much for your comment Will try to improve the article and let to know.! Thanks.!

Request on 15:25:43, 11 May 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by 195.99.35.77
HI, I could not submit my article I do not think it is an advert, it describes who we are and what we do. If you want I am more than happy to send you promotion material to distinguish. We use similar text for our press releases and it has never been an issue before. There are no prices or application links in the article. Can you please let me know which part of the text seemed to be an advert to you? I am more than happy to delete, but please give me some guidance, because me, and the whole team do not understand what is the problem with it. Much obliged, Greg

195.99.35.77 (talk) 15:25, 11 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Hello Greg. A big improvement is to not copy any text from http://startupcampus.hu/en/scu . Also there are promotional parts. Let me take a random part of your submission.

''Through the program, we wish to set up an „innovation acceleration system” to find and support the potential of universities and research centres that have not been exploited. The program aims to develop innovative ideas into new enterprises and to accelerate local R&D products and services based on knowledge transfer models and university incubation methodologies. Moreover, it helps young innovators to develop their entrepreneurial skills and broaden their business knowledge.''

This is entirely promotional. I do not know what your definition of promotional is, but this is a straight-up ad. And the whole article is like this. I suggest rewriting the article from scratch, and I didn't even mention this version has no references and will not be accepted anyway. Regards, -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  18:08, 11 May 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: High Performance Parallex has been accepted
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08:26:24, 13 May 2018 review of submission by Angadjjm
Dear sir I don't cleary understand why the page i submitted was declined. The only comment was youtube is not a reliable source. Agreed but i have also submitted numerous newspaper articles and direct websites links. Please resolve my issue as soon as possible so i can correct my mistakes because This means a lot to me and my family. Thank you Have a nice day Angadjjm (talk) 08:26, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
 * As I said in the decline reason, Youtube is a unreliable source. Remove it and resubmit. -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  07:14, 14 May 2018 (UTC)

Jimmy Corinis article
May I ask if you have noticed that amazon's website is only one of six references I posted about Jimmy Corinis' works?

Please inform me about,

Friendly, --ΑΝώΔυΝος (talk) 08:05, 14 May 2018 (UTC)

11:54:16, 14 May 2018 review of submission by SusanSoyinka
I am having a great deal of difficulty in amending my article on Albert Reuss to suit your requirements. I have been accused of infringing copyright by quoting from the article https://artuk.org/discover/stories/albert-reuss-the-artist-as-refugee, and some of the wording which originates from that article has been deleted. In fact, I wrote the Art UK article myself, having been commissioned by Art UK to do so. Since that article and my Wikipedia article are about the same subject, it is inevitable that some of the content is similar or even identical. Following advice from one of your editors, I have been in touch with Art UK about releasing my text under an appropriate Creative Commons licence, and this has now been done, so I hope that will resolve the problem. I hope it will now be possible for you to restore most of the content which has been deleted, and accept my article.

However, should there be any further difficulty, I would also like to say that my work is thoroughly researched and my sources are provided. I have carried out a great deal of original research on this artist which has included obtaining copies of much of his lifetime's correspondence from an organisation in Vienna called "basis wien", as well as his biographical information from the Jewish archives in Vienna (IKG). I have also interviewed many people who knew him, and have been in correspondence with his niece in the USA. My intention in writing this article is to bring to the attention of the public the life and work of a much neglected but important artist.

SusanSoyinka (talk) 11:54, 14 May 2018 (UTC)

14:31:09, 14 May 2018 review of submission by Angadjjm
Sir i have removed the YouTube reference as you said. How much time will it take to the article to move to the main space. Thanks you. Regards. Angad

Angadjjm (talk) 14:31, 14 May 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Danube Delta Campaign has been accepted
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Draft
Hi actually the draft i made was notable but im just suck at referencing im quite new, the draft was notable as like Dr Disrect and Ninja (streamer).
 * Hi. If you want to increase the chance that your article is getting accepted, remove source 1, 3 and 6. Those are unreliable sources. -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  12:04, 12 May 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Personale (talk • contribs) 12:49, 12 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks. I looked further into the article and saw the following :
 *  he received a major owner on his hometown after his rise to popularity through the Fortnite.[ref] Myth is the sole member picked up by TSM, as he has been signed as the team's captain. because of it TSM is joining the scene of an esport but could very soon, Fortnite Battle Royale is next up for the esports juggernaut..

I don't understand this. What is a major owner on his hometown? What is a esports juggernaut? What does Because of it TSM is joining the scene of an esport but could very soon mean? Are they already a esports team or will they become one very soon? -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  13:27, 12 May 2018 (UTC)
 * ow sorry it was "honor" not owner he was awarded for being the best fortnite player, they are already on the esport, jaggarnaut name of their esports, soon their team TSM will be adding on list fortnite soon according to the source i get, possibly game list. and he is famous with ninja (streamer) this 2018 due to being the best fortnite streamer.


 * I moved it into main page article but it was speedy deleted due to promotion? Can you check my Draft:TSM Myth (streamer) and help thank you in advance.  Personale (talk) 06:01, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
 * he received a major honor on his hometown after his rise to popularity through the Fortnite.
 * I still don't understand this, and it may be better to remove this sentence as it is unsourced. -- &raquo;  Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  07:17, 14 May 2018 (UTC)
 * ✅ what's next, actually i asked this draft for help and one perosn said this person doesnt meet notabillity and one article meets deletion. Saints & Sinners Bingo. Personale (talk) 07:28, 15 May 2018 (UTC)
 * the article Myth (streamer) was recently accepted thanks for all the help. Cheers! Personale (talk) 07:24, 15 May 2018 (UTC)

18:52:10, 15 May 2018 review of submission by WaltDisneyPixarFanGirl
Hi, Shadowowl! Thank you for your review. I totally understand the comment about Instagram, I deleted the link, even though it was an official instagram of one of the biggest VFX company in the world. That being said, the article is filled with articles from the biggest media in the entertainment industry as IndieWire, most famous Award Academy in the world such as VES, Oscars Qualifying festival such as Sitges Film Festival and the biggest CGI software in the world as Autodesk, and other - or reliable Data Base as IMDb. Please let me know what could be added if needed. WaltDisneyPixarFanGirl (talk) 18:52, 15 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks. If you remove the IMDB reference (IMDB should be in external links section only) the chance the article will be accepted will rise.-- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  10:59, 16 May 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Deathraiser (May 16)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Marcin Rygiel (May 16)
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KylieTastic (talk) 20:36, 16 May 2018 (UTC)

14:31:28, 17 May 2018 review of submission by SusanSoyinka
Hi, Shadowowl. Please could you respond to the comment I made on your talk page on 14 May. I first submitted my article about Albert Reuss in March, and I am hoping it can now be accepted. This has been a very stressful process. SusanSoyinka (talk) 14:31, 17 May 2018 (UTC)

Draft:Arcadiy Harting
Thank you. I have not touched it in years, and thought it had been deleted. I have just re-read it, and I thought it is ready to be submitted. what do you think?BorisG (talk) 17:11, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
 * It is submitted and waiting for review. -- &raquo; Shadowowl  &#124;  talk  17:41, 17 May 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Booted eagles has been accepted
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