User talk:Shahbaz2001/sandbox

You can add where you got the article from. Also can you teach me how to site, because wikipedia is very complicated and I will never trust it

Be specific when talking about time periods (first sentence)

break up the paragraphs and cite the source right aafter you quote it (you could also write where you found the information in the article)

write about the negative/ positive implications of the act

nice research... what you have written is very good, fact driven, and extensive... mabye find a way to make it easier to the reader to follow by creating several paragraphs and having more advanced organization. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Racheldm11 (talk • contribs) 19:21, 21 October 2018 (UTC)