User talk:ShakeithaG/sandbox

I think your explanation of this organization is really clear and thorough, but something that might make it better would be incorporating more concrete evidence of the work that the organization has done in the world. I might add a section or two devoted to specific acts they have carried out, or issues they have been actively involved in. I think that would make the article more thorough and concrete for the reader! You could also add more information about the founders and how the organization came to be if you're looking for ways to make your piece more substantial. Also, I would double-check some of your grammar. I know there is a spot in your second paragraph where you use dashes instead of commas, and that's a really easy fix. Great work so far! - Caroline