User talk:Shakeitup2252

Bride and Prejudice plot summary
I've reverted your addition to the plot summary in Bride and Prejudice, as excessively long and detailed, and contrary to the guidelines in WP:FILMPLOT.

Note that the manual of style for film articles calls for "basic descriptions of their plots", suggests a length of 400-700 words, and warns that "[t]he summary should not exceed the range". After your edit, the plot was 962 words long, so almost 40% longer than the recommended maximum. Nor was it a "basic description": it was more of a scene-by-scene reprise of the film, including the songs. This is far too much detail.

Please don't take this as a personal attack, but the quality of the English in your addition was very poor. There are no paragraph breaks; spaces between sentences are missing; capitalization is random; there are run-on sentences and comma splices; and in general, it's very difficult for a native English speaker to read. I hasten to say that if I tried to write a section of an article in any language other than English, it would be much worse; I reluctantly have to accept my limitations, and hope that you're willing to do likewise. Ammodramus (talk) 04:12, 18 October 2012 (UTC)