User talk:Shakiraurena/sandbox

I really like your wiki part. I think you should add more about the crime. For example, if there is any a certain part of Dorchester that might have a high crime rate. I like how you described the different parks that Dorchester has and how it was formed. You can also add different community centers/YMCA that is in the area. They can do activities there (Stephanie.lewis58 (talk))

Shakiraurena, I like what you have done so far. I would add more to the Crime section and for the Financial, I would not bullet it but have a paragraph. There are 5 banks in the area............Most of the banks are in this section of town...... etc, -Dr. Chenault Tiffygc1 (talk) 19:49, 15 April 2016 (UTC)