User talk:Shanecia brown/Ascot

Mickel graham (talk) 23:54, 2 April 2021 (UTC) firstly, the edits in my view were done fittingly, reconstructing most of the paragraphs and made them more fluent for the reader, also noticing few grammatical error that was made and corrected them, also there was some significant sources that was added to the article. however, the themes that was edited with new sources could've been cited further, also in theme femininity in the Caribbean felt lacking some additional information that could've made the point more enhanced and easier to understandMickel graham (talk) 23:54, 2 April 2021 (UTC)

Noted will make the proper adjustments Jamdun editor 2 (talk) 09:28, 6 April 2021 (UTC)